Reviews for Personal Bubbles
no one chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
Respect the bubble! Respect it!
BigBootyBaby chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
I didn't know what to expect - certainly not the ending.

Very interesting take on "personal bubble".
Blue Hunny chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
This may be one of the most well-rounded, quietly amusing, and well-articulated examples of randometry that I have read.

I, too, like the cat ending. It's simple, much like this review.

On second thought, all the unnecessary modifiers in my first sentence make this a not so simple review.
celestial1 chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
Cute. I like the ending too ;)
Recipe chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
ROTF LMAO

This was adorable. Completely keyed in character. I love it.
I beg you to continue thinking up stories at eight in the morning, please xP
Sothis Star1 chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
This was very amusing, and I could picture the spaz out very clearly the way you described it. I think my favorite line was: "It's invisible! And understood! You're not supposed to pop the bubble, but you keep popping the bubble!" I like how you write Jake as being a little wary and sardonic and not entirely on board with everything at this point.

Oh, and the cat thing was hilarious, cute, and so awesomely random. Perfect way to end it.
Y-C-H-3000 chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
ROFL loved this fic realy comic. I also start feeling alot of empathy for Jake as the space bubble is a unerversal human trait (me sadly being human rather than Na'vi)
nanoks chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
"Respect the bubble"

Cute! like your story!
emrldeyes chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
Is that an Alien reference I spy? Or just a coincidence?

Anyways, cool story!
ms. muffet chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
A Frumious Bandersnatch, I hope you write more stories with your wonderful wit and excellent observation.

Matt87, I strongly disagree, the body language Jake displays in the movie is definately not of the affectionate kind. His eyes are not soft when he turns to Neytiri and as soon as Neytiri steps back out of his personal space, he turns his head back to resume practice with the bow. That is the exact kind of reaction one should have when invading someone's personal space. There is a thread discussing this very thing in the
Annon chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
I loved the last line. Lol. And right on for the Alien reference!
Savage-Stiletto chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
XD XD XD

Hilarious. Absolutely hilarious. I adored the whole "personal-bubble" spaz out Jake had.
E. Taylor chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
Bwahaha Grace's response made me laugh so hard. Very funny.
ReflectiveMuse chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
Nicely written, cute and very amusing piece. :) I especially loved the segments referring to Ripley the cat and Jake's space-bubble gestures. Well done!
Matt87 chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
Ms Muffet if you read the Avatar script that's available online, you'll know that in that bow scene that Jake was liking that Neytiri was getting up close and personal on his bubble space! ha ha!

In this story, he doesn't like it, but in the movie he definitely does.
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