i want gilberts POV and where he disappeared to when he was kicked story was compex and good but kinda confusing.

This is a very odd story. But I find that I do like it more than I should.
Not because of the strange way you arranged it (which is part) but also the way it's presented. It fades together almost. Like a spectrum of colours.
But very good all together :)

I wasn't going to review this, but ok.
I hate Germancest with all my heart (yes, I have my reasons for that, it's not only because it's incest) and I refuse to read every fanfiction about them, but this is an exception. I'm amazed with every single line of it, how you portray the characters, the complications of their relationship. In fact, this is one of the few fanfiction I have seen in this fandom that don't portray an incestuous relationship as something cute and accepted. It's a taboo and you portrayed it very well here. If I were in Elizabeta's place, I have no idea what I would do. Freak out, probably. It's not cute, it's very complicated and difficult for everyone. A relationship like this in real life probably would bring a lot of problems. Actually, this fanfiction made me look at Germancest a different way. I still don't like them as a pairing, but I can see how their relationship could work (though I don't think they go well together, but it's just my opinion). It kinda traumatized me because I'm stupid, I read it mouths ago and still can't stop thinking about it. Of the complications, the sickness, how terrible it would be if it happened in real life, and worse, if happened to people close to me. I have no idea what I would do, though it's not even my business. (But if I was like Elizabeta is to them... Well, it would be kinda of hell).
This is so amazing I don't know what else to say. I like how confusing it is, it made me feel sick or something, I had to read it twice to understand it well and still, I don't think I understood it completely. Simply amazing. You are fantastic.
Sorry for the long review and for any mistake.
This fanfiction is great.

OKAY

I LOVED IT

AND I THOUGHT IT WAS FRICKIN GLORIOUS

AND YOUR STYLE IS AMAZING AND BEAUTIFUL AND SO RICH IT BURNS

...BUUUUT I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT'S GOING ON. MY BRAIN EXPLODED TOO EARLY FROM THE SHEER AWESOME, AND I'VE REREAD IT FOUR TIMES, BUT I'M NOT GOOD WITH JUMPING POVS /SOB

(so, uh, I don't get the lines, "Nothing in this world will convince him this huge man towering above him is his little brother – nothing, because they do not look alike at all – except the eyes, which are blue, just like Ludwig's, and that deep voice which is not Ludwig's says his name in the way Ludwig used to." because I'm a fucktard. D:)

But either way, it was really, really, really, really good. Great job, man. :)

Thank you for writing this. Germancest is my otp, but it bugs me when people just brush over the fact that it is incest and ignore the complications. This has to be the most authentic depiction of such a relationship I've found in a germancest fanfic, and written so poetically as well!

I read it three times and still don't know what to say. It's a great story, and I loved your writing and how you put all the characters. Elizaveta's moments were one of my favorites, definetely, because it was such a GREAT idea!

Great, great job. And I have to ask you: would you let me translate this fanfic to portuguese? All credits to you, obviously~

Once again, great job. And I'll read it one more time /o/

Wow, this is incredible. Your style is beautiful, I rarely see prose so poetic and emotive. I loved the background and depth you give each character with so few words, you're just amazing to me.

woah. It all came together, it was so amazing and breathtaking. you are awesome.

Ah

I came

THIS

is so good

Im so quoting it

in my religion class

Ill hype it up

This is so great

Oh the mighty doujinshi. What a great story! Oh! Oh, how I love it so! Mm!

This was so beautiful and tragic and you've reminded why I love Germancest so much.

So broken up, but it still flows nicely, not overwhelming at all.

You've captured one of the main reasons to why I love Germancest. This pairing is so beautifully tragic. And your fanfic was so beautifully tragic.

You know, many times I wonder, why must stories by long, and complex, and dragging for them to be loved and remembered forever? Perhaps people don't really remember the stories, the plot, but all the time they've spent reading them. Hmm... I thought it was supposed to be quality over quantity...

Anyways, I'm so going to fave this and read it again and again when I have time. And then, I can take it apart and analyze it better. Thanks for such a refreshing piece~ Pieces like this always makes your day, you know?

Pedophilia, huh. Elizaveta...

Well, let's see...I -do- like the characterization, and Elizaveta playing the part of...a person like Pip's older sister from Great Expectations...is not only interesting, but appealing for this sort of story.

Nice writing style too...it's a sort of new look on Ludwig and Gilbert this way. And wonderful dialogue.

~PT

So beautiful. ;_;

*otherwise speechless*