i have enjoyed the concept of this story, it was a really good idea but im sorry i just can't carry on with it. I've tried so hard but you need a Beta, too many mistakes and its makes for jerky reading and the plot seems like it could have been explored alot more. im not flaming. i have really liked the concept.

I'm just gonna imagine that was all a ploy to get Tom to wake up...

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NOOOOOOOOOOOO
HOW COULD YOU!?

Cute story thanks for writing it.

Please don't listen to that nasty reviewer, you write lovely fan fictions.

I understand the Harry and Draco room thing me and my sister use to do the same thing

Great story. But Tom should kill victor. I'm not sure but Blake hating his father feels wrong and selfish. He would know it's all dumbledores fault and that Harry wouldn't be happy without Tom. Harry and Tom have a child together and history. He wouldn't feel like he is divided between Tom and victor. So Tom kills victor Harry forgives him. But like I said Blake hating his father is wrong

Wow great another Rick Riordan

this story needs a sqeul or another chapter because cliffhangers suck its also a good way to piss people off of inless there family then it comes natreally.i don't mean to sound sorry if I mom tought me to be blunt.

Wy u do Dat wyyyyyyy
Seriously why that's so mean
But Still great story
And fu** u

love your story so far! please keep giving your best to all your other stories to!

I...am disgusted that you won't allow us to HELP YOU!

I cannot read a story that hurts my brain. Sorry.

~Nox [irritated]

I'm very sorry, but you need a beta, or a spell-checker, or something. The grammar is off, and it physically and mentally hurts me to read stories like these. Great idea! ~Nox

Nice story

Wow! That was great