How deep it struck me..Well, your poem has something that I like, which is unstructured and doesn't depend on the crutch of rhyme, giving more power to the emotions you convey instead of distracting with unnecessary words..And you pointed somehting very important towards me..MY POETRY SUCKS! *screech*

I've read this before, but my old sn, INfamousKalli got kicked off of because of a few complications. LOL anyways, Really nicely done. , i love the poems done for Angel Sanctuary

WOW! That was really really good. I really like the last line, "You smile, your own little smile." That is a really great ending for this poem and it's powerful too.

I really liked this poem for alot of reasons. It goes so well with the story. And I can really realte to alot of it. Your write beautifuly.

*turns into a puddle of bubbling mud*

*takes a day to recover*

*goes and shoves all her poetry up Rociel's a-*

*died*

Nice! Very deep and moving.

Another good one -!

intersting! i like it!

Wow, that was very good! I liked that fic a lot!