I thought this was a sick fic, but boy, was I mistaken. Starting from the line "You love him. God, how you love him" I had to stop reading every fee paragraphs to breathe just lots of times. Damn! Too good! I'm weeping!
The emotional and descriptive thoughts were exquisite, the interactions were such a delight! The dynamics depicted are basically my favourite and I never tire of them, few as they come. Now mix them all together and we get this masterpiece! I feel like melting into a puddle now?
Thank you very much!

This is one of the most beautiful stories I've read. Yugi, Atem, and their relationship...it's all done so well and I think the second person narration really adds to the emotionality of it all. This was so touching and a joy to read. I've been sobbing since chapter 4 ;) Great work!

Oh my god. Love the ending but still cried.

This story is such an achievement. It's a stunning piece of work, lyrical and poetic and absolutely heart-wrenching in the best way. Bravo!

This is beautiful. Actually, that word is too ugly to describe the masterpiece you have written. Ack, my words don't do it justice! Such a sweet ending. It almost made me cry.

That was beautiful! So descriptive and emotional and very well done!

I don't know what to say, I just loved it.

"You always knew you never belonged in there, and to now know you are not, and never were, some dark specter of games and shadow, you feel a freeing sense of vindication."

Apart from thinking that this story is beautiful and emotional and so well written, this line sticks with me because I think a lot of people in the fandom forget this, and to read about Atem thinking it was brilliant to me.

Oh my Gods... This is just... I cant explain... Well.. Lets just say it was very very good.. And sad.. And happy.. Dear God.. Well.. Im kinda overwhelmed.. Good story.. I mean really..

Well, at least we know what happened when Yuugi appears to laugh at a wall for no reason, ne?

Aw... That was adorable. _ You wrote this really well, because I bet a lot of people are going to feel sympathy for not only Yuugi, but Atem as well, since he really couldn't do much.

What can I say? I wholeheartedly agree with what the other reviewers say, that this is an absolutely brilliant, emotional story, and I love how you wrote it in second person and yet made it sound even more intimate than first! And I was fascinated by your description of the afterlife, soemthing I try to do in a different way in my own stories, I loved yours. I also liked the way you mentioned Atem's family, and how they meant a lot to him even when he was so in love. Just great.

That...was...amazing. Arguably the best piece of fanfiction I ever have or will read. And to do it in the 2nd person too! Normally people can't pull that off, but you did it beautifully.

Everything about this fic was gorgeous; the writing, the characterization, your portrayal of his afterlife...

Anyway, forgive me; I'm just practically in tears atm. XD Anyway, wonderful fic!

One word: Beautiful.

I like that Yugi did move on and started a family even if he didn't replace Yami in his heart which was a good thing because Yami was his first love. Now Yugi and Yami have forever in the afterlife to be together.

Wonderful ending to a great story!

I thought the last installment ended this story but I'm so glad you gave it this chapter. Atemu had to wait so long for this but he finally found peace. Beautiful story.