Did you purposely butcher the Love Story lyrics?

Good story. I love superchick! Stand in the rain is my second favorite song by them

I want cookies and aligator Miggy

update update update now!

Love it!

MORE!

okay...so not that I don't like the story (which I do :D) but don't you think that the transition from your hot to I hate to we'll-start-calling-each-other-baby-when-we-barely-stopped-hating-each-other. Just a note. the time transition is a little fast. but this is such a great story!

HAHAHA! i like the last sentance! good job deffinatly worth updating!

Can't wait for the next chapter!PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

is it just me,or are you as big of an Avril fan as me? it took me hours to get it...:v

Uhg horrible

I cant read anymore of this. The story line is great but it's jumping around like a bunny on crack. It just doesn't work. Also there's almost zero detail. There's a few thought and a few actions but otherwise nothing and what's with fang? The first chapter he's the cool, calm, hardass guy and then he see's her at practice and he turns into a wimp. The character personalitys are changeing from chapter to chapter. Oh and I really don't see the point of taking lyrics from popular songs and putting them in there. Most people tend to just skip over that part all together.

lol

other than goodvstart not much to say on the story so far but i love you user name the origonal is my favorite

Awesome chappie!