| Reviews for Sweet Downfalls |
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The Dark Princess Laia chapter 23 . 2/6 this is one of the best Remadora fics that I've read so far! I sincerely hope that you don't give this story up and find the time to keep it going. it would be really sad to leave it this way. Anyway, it's an awesome story, thank you for sharing! |
Ravenclawmaddy13 chapter 23 . 6/21/2019 It’s so sad that this story never got its proper ending. I just want to congratulate you on writing this story with so much heart to it. You also did a magnificent job writing Tonks which can be hard for some writers. I also love how you portrayed Remus, and his lycanthropy. Also I just have a question. When you tried typing made up words did it always try and change them because my computer and phone does. Please keep writing! |
Linda chapter 23 . 5/22/2019 Your story is really great. Such thoughtful writing and mi rushing thinghs. I know it‘s been a long time, but hopefully you‘ll continue the story. Please! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2019 I liked this chapter in general, particularly Tonks's insecurities and annoyance. But your Remus is a bit too relaxed when talking about his condition. I can't imagine him at least not offering Tonks a chance to work with someone else. And I still can't believe he wouldn't have told her the truth, because he now comes across as dishonest. When Ron calls him a werewolf in PoA, he stiffens immediately, so it's not like he's comfortable with such situations. I mean, he met plenty of people who had no idea he is a werewolf, and must have spent those meetings thinking what they'd do if they knew the truth. So that part was sort of strange to me. I rather like your Snape, but him using a word freak seemed out of place somehow. His language generally seems rather formal. And one more thing. In another chapter Remus says he can't marry her because the law forbids this. But then how could he start a relationship with her at all, knowing it would not lead anywhere. I'd imagine he would not get involved with anyone if he knew that he couldn't offer not only financial support, but even marriage. And they did get married in the book. |
TheGash chapter 23 . 10/24/2017 Loved the whole story. Please, update :) |
Sarah1996 chapter 23 . 5/21/2017 Amazing! This is without a doubt one of my all time favourite Remus/Tonks fanfics ever! :) I know it's been a while since you last updated, but is there any chance at all of you updating this story soon? It would make me soooo happy! :) |
botany957 chapter 13 . 8/14/2016 this is such great storytelling |
IdrielElenssar chapter 21 . 1/29/2016 # |
peachpaige chapter 23 . 8/3/2015 Oh my god that's it!? I want to cry. You haven't updated in 4 years, will you ever continue? It's a great story and I'll put you down for an alert just in case. |
Julia Guest chapter 23 . 5/6/2015 "To be continued", you said, in 2011... 4 years ago... *cries at the lack of an ending for a story I was so into* |
Julia Guest chapter 9 . 5/5/2015 That bit at the end, about her being naive, he being jaded, and them comforting each other - did you write that or is it a quote from something else? It sounds SO familiar! Really a beautiful quote, either way. |
Julia Guest chapter 8 . 5/5/2015 I'm enjoying this so much! You are an excellent writer and Remus and Tonks are perfectly in character. Can't wait to see how it all plays out! |
fymgfgvmjh chapter 23 . 1/24/2015 Can't you pleasepleaseplease come back to this? *puppy eyes* |
Guest chapter 23 . 7/20/2014 when's the next chapter ;-; I miss reading this. |
remusdora chapter 23 . 5/24/2014 Pleaseeeeeee please please please please please please please complete this story last chapter was beautiful, it very good story try complete this please. love the chemistry between remustonks. do reply to this review. |