| Reviews for Make me forget I'm a monster Gaara lemon oneshot |
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Guest chapter 1 . 4/30/2018 Gaara doesn't behave or act like Gaara at all, he's way too cheesy. Also they did it on the roof. But other then that I liked the smut part and I liked how you reletarded Michiru to Gaara cause shes a "monster" too. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2017 I like the stort but i just have to ask they never went inside so they did it on the roof for all to see? |
Draven uchiha chapter 1 . 11/6/2017 great story |
Lonniebihh chapter 1 . 3/13/2017 ah, it was a good story but Gaara was a tad OOC, and it had quite a few grammar mistakes and it irritated me xD I'm one for grammar, just improve a bit on the characters, grammar, and story line, then you're good to go. |
Hannah chapter 1 . 1/5/2017 I loved it hope you write another one great job. |
Nami chapter 1 . 3/9/2016 I really liked it |
Desiree chapter 1 . 11/25/2015 Cool story |
Jailyn chapter 1 . 6/7/2015 Since they were on the roof, didn't the others here that? :3 I hope there ok... |
otakufreak chapter 1 . 4/8/2014 Omg major cumville I love this story! |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/10/2014 That was very good! _ |
gotenks84.bc chapter 1 . 2/7/2014 It felt like I myself was with Gaara the ENTIRE TIME! GREAT JOB! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2014 This is one of the things I hate to read. If you were gonna make a lemon, or generally something romantic, don't make it cheesy. And what's worse is, your Gaara is completely OOC. It feels like you've just taken his name and stapled it onto the head of some random blushing 6 year old |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2013 People don't cry that easily. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2013 I love it |
sMaRt OnE chapter 1 . 12/8/2012 I LOVE THE STORY! |