cant wait for chapter 10

One of the best fanfics ever. Too bad it stopped.

I am liking this very much. I find the relationship between green and wallace absolutely hilarious and I hope you'll update soon.

Think that the "puzzle"you used instead of the way Delta do it was a smartway to replace it. Keep them coming xD

I like your story. It's like Inside but notably different and not a ripoff. Keep up the good work!

Oh man! this was awesome!

Update? please?

I really enjoyed this story and i look foward to more of it. (i hate to be short and frank but im on the move).

Little moth, I absolutely love this! I hope that I can see more of your work soon.

-Sander Cohen

Sinclair!

This just got more fun...

Yay Sinclair! (hugs) Anyhow, this is coming at a nice clip. Good job.

This is AWESOME! I want to read more of this as soon as possible. I look forward to your next update. :]

Awesome! Sinclair's back!

Same here, I always wondered how Delta knew he could save Little Sisters. Then again, maybe Big Daddies naturally have the potential, but need to be told to do so.

After all, the Alpha Series was the only series that could use Plasmids.

Great Chapter, good grammer, and details!

It's nice to see my story serve as a source of inspiration for others. I feel so... Important!

Granted, now that there is another Big Daddy story I need to compete with, I'll have to declare us MORTAL ENEMIES!

... Okay not really.

In all seriousness, I'll attempt to conduct this review without basing it on the inspirational source.

I like how Green is set up. He's not quite free of his conditioning, yet he does have some room to question what is going on around him. Every Little discovery he makes feels like a major break through for the reader (for me, anyway), and when I found that Green never realized that he was fastened to a table, I had a good laugh. AT a few points, however, I felt myself feel that the expanded mindset of Green meant that he should have taken a little more interest in his surroundings, but that could just stem from my writing a story about a fully aware Big Daddy.

The idea of him being both best friends with a Splicer and having a connection with all mankind intrigues me, I'm curious about what will happen to him. The plot has good opportunities for expansions, and the possibilities in Green's future seems limitless.

Grammar wise, you officially receive the RatherHomely seal of approval. You have a good variety in vocabulary, and your imagery seems strong.

Normally I round off a review with some criticisms,but this story is pretty solid. I suppose a few chapters seem to drag a little bit, and, since Sinclair doesn't help Green or Wallace, chapter 9 feels mostly pointless, serving little purpose then to bring Sinclair back from the dead. However, stories need these dragging areas for character development and for the reader to get a breather.

Oh, before I forget, Wallace's language is fine. I've heard worse. I think the cursing helps to add to his characterization, actually.

So, continue writing. I'll most certainly continue to read, as will others. Keep up the good work.

Sorry to resort to primitive methods of comunication, but the only thing I can say is...

MOAR!

Yay update!

I very much hope Joe gets a drill to the face...

Grace was my favorite! T_T

Great update!