This has the best damn AN I've ever read. The "endeavor" bit is masterfully crafted.

Well done! You totally messed my mind there. Congratulations!
- Darkkiller9

I read this story over and over again...and EVERY SINGLE TIME I READ IT, you fool me yet again! I never remember that it's actually SAKURA that's preggers...kuddos, Riko! You truly are convincing :D

I had such high hopes for either a crack fic, or a kunai being shoved where the sun don't shine. Ah well, it was nicely done either way. I have to say though, I didn't expect the end, nice touch there.

Ja Ne

did naruto like impregnate half the village or somethiing or or ohhhh my head hurts

I KNEW IT~!

I KNEW it wasn't yaoi! You explicitly avoided the gender and the recipient of the vomiting and everything, and I just KNEW that it wasn't yaoi at all!

!

Nice touch on the NaruTen in the end. :3

Yah!

I read kunai and briefly, I think of Tenten, dismiss the thought,think of Yaoi and then I have to stop myself from clicking the little 'x'.

It was good and worth reading. That's rare nowadays.

That is all.

oh it deffinetly played with my mind. i was confused the whole time!

Very well written, you can play with the reader's mind indeed. Great job! Disapointing lack of yaoi though. (no ammount of good writting can take away the jet lag of being left yaoi-less) XD

LMAO

haha nice one Riko!

i chuckle.

nicely twisting the readers impressions.

I see what you did thar!

YOU SICK JERK! DONT PLAY WITH PEOPLE'S EMOTIONS! I really did think that naruto was pregnate... i will flame you! *whatever the hell that means*

Reko this was very misleading. I came in expecting hot man on man action. Of which there was very little. Then you bring that slag Sakura into the mix. I frown sir, I frown so much.

Tenten was great though. I liked the fic, and it's misleading nature. Glad it wasn't Yaoi. Sakura is still a slag though.

You totally tricked me!

What a wit. :)

I didn't look at sentence structure or punctuation...

But you didn't seem to misspell anything and you only misused two words.

I only remember one of them, the other was really minor.

Here:

"It was rhetoric in fact..."

That should be rhetorical.

Is does change the meaning slightly to use the other form of the word.

But, your English... it is not so bad.

Your sense of humor though...

You are a BAD BAD MAN!

Btw, Lainana/Ageant is my OTP too, noble anon. We should write kink together. It would be the work of beauty, the work of body liquids. Our babies would be marvellous, and nobody would ever have to know.