Reviews for i love you' is a slip of the tongue
sugardash chapter 3 . 11/6/2012
And ill be waiting to be amazed.
kai chapter 2 . 2/28/2010
i love this the amount of detail in the reading makes it visable and truely rushed it all seems to go at a stedy pace without over analizing in and making long useless analagies that go on the progression keep it up,already intreged though now that i think about it tsunade never actually looked in on narutos problem before telling him about sasuke but i guess informantion like that cant be stalled for you can update soon
Prussian Approved chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
XD I never read the original so, I don't know if it is better or worse but it totally liked this! XD
justacumbercookie chapter 2 . 2/27/2010
AGH i wanna read more its such an intriging story.

I love the description you have put in this one and the little similys and phrases they really make it sound like it was wrote by a professional author
Josey-Josey Uchiha chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
this story is amazing. its so much better than the origina, please upload another chapter soon cuz the cliff hanger at the end of chapter 2 is evil. i never thought i would like the idea of Gaara and Sakura being together, but it really brings the story together.
justacumbercookie chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
i think this is better than the original by miles as there is much more description and makes me want to read on ore than the other.
sacrificedeath chapter 2 . 2/27/2010
damn this chapter left shivers running through my spinee. awesomee chapter
Fae Pyre chapter 2 . 2/27/2010
I'm adding this to my favs list, good work! _
keshia-515 chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
i like it... kinda disortintating but i think thats what u were trying to show.. cant wait for the next chapter! please update soon!

~keshia_515
Blarh chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
loved it!

cant wait for an update!
domi chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
let us see what is coming in rewrite