Reviews for Chaos
Azure Neko chapter 2 . 6/29/2009
Interesting. Mouko really should take care of Genma quickly before the other fiances catch wind of her. She won't take care of Shampoo or Cologne so easily as the Kuno siblings. If she's old enough to break her engagements, then she can stay in Nerima as long as she likes. Also, if she's got tiger features, then why isn't Ranma getting nervous around her?
jdcocoagirl chapter 2 . 10/19/2007
i just came across this and i like to tell you that this is a very nice take on the ranma story, hope you'll be able to continue this.

thanks

jd
dglsprincess105 chapter 2 . 9/15/2004
Please continue this story. Its creative and has gotten my attention so far and everyone is in character. No one is acting different with the exception of Ranma and Akane, but after what happened at Mt. Phoenix, that is to be expected. And ignore the Mary Sue hater. She doesn't know what she's talking about.

a.) There has never been an ugly girl in the Ranma universe, so yes, she has to be beautiful.

b.)Of course she can fight. This is Nerima! If you don't know how to fight then you are signing your own death warrent.

c.) I have yet to see any girl that Kuno doesn't love. Nabiki is an exception, even Kuno is not that stupid as to love her.

Update soon! :)
ultimate mary sue hater chapter 1 . 12/14/2003
*sigh* gawd not another one
MARY-SUE ALERT!
hullo! she's beautiful, kuno loves her, and she fights perfectly
AGRH! DON'T YOU THINK WE HAVE ENOUGH MARY SUES!
this is not a flame however b/c i like the rest of the story, just tone down Mouko, please!
D-Chan3 chapter 2 . 2/1/2002
Ohhh! Way to go Akane! Bad Nabiki-shame on her! I would have liked to see a bit more violence on Ranma's part -to the people who had bought the lingerie. I hope Ranma and Akane get together in the end! Please write more!
Super Kawaii chapter 1 . 1/30/2002
Great story. I hope you continue soon.
D-Chan3 chapter 1 . 1/30/2002
i like this story so far, but it is too early to tell what's going on. What's the deal with that person saying Akane's name? Please continue!
Forte chapter 1 . 1/29/2002
Sweet! Great work, you two! I hardly know anything about Ranma and now I wanna go see some. ;;; Keep eet up!
kit carlson chapter 1 . 1/29/2002
A real fire-cat...please,continue this.