Wouldn't it have been interesting if youhad a chapter 2, and updated it with his meeting Ziva 15-16 years later. A very nice story

OF course the "little" girl was Ziva. It would be interesting if you wrote a story where Gibbs remembers her.

I could picture the scene between Gibbs and little!Ziva so well. This was amazing, thanks for posting. I love the thought of people meeting early in life and then again later, never knowing that it was the same person.

Again, a outstanding story, and a glimpse we don't often get - a younger Gibbs, and a VERY young Ziva... excellent story!

Amazing story. Well-written and presented superbly. You created a story of strength and sadness - Ziva saving Gibbs and Ziva being in that situation at that age to save him. Excellent.

If their ages were closer, something like this could have definitely happened. Great story. I don't happen to care about the difference in their ages, since I'm a big Zibbs fan.

This is an excellent story.

Unexpected even, just for the subject matter.

I really, really liked it.

Loved it ! Love the fatherly side of him...I love this time when he had a home with his beloved ones to go back to...

Thanks, very well done.

Very well done! Very beautiful and thought provoking.

Beautiful story. Well written, and it shows a lot of emotion. Thank you!

It's beautiful,breath taking and heart breaking.

Very cool story!