uh yeah I'm gonna need a minute , phew! HOT!

Should write a story that cont. later.

OOFT! That was hot. Leaving the handprint as evidence... Cute!

Hello!
I don't usually post reviews, as I tend to read and lurk but I wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed this peice! It was imaginative and well written and best of all I can totally picture it happening like I was watching an episode! Well done! My favorite part was McGee locking himself in the ballistics lab " like a little girl".. Thanks again!

love the story would have loved to read the later bit when he comes back to get abby xx but this is good xxx

An excellent story! You depicted everything so well, that it was easy to imagine everything that was happening. Outstanding writing! Thanks for sharing this story.

love how protective and sly and sexy gibbs is in this... soso good!

A good story.

Oh my god. ...that scene was as steamy as the shower I just took. Holy Shit. I don't know if it was your intent but.. I do believe the torture he put her through, flowed over to the read (ie: me) and holy god. Later better happen, because if later doesn't happen, it's not gonna be pretty.

... so very amazing. VERY amazing... and now that I'm rambling umm.. incoherently, I'm going to go now.

all i can say is hot hot hot!

u should totally continue this!

Wow! Cool story! I wish it was longer...! I can just picture it all - McGee being scared of angry Abby, and Gibbs being a big tease and making Abby wait - but still being caring enough to make sure no one could walk in and see them, protecting her privacy. They make one HOT, if ODD, couple!

Please, let there be more to this!

Oh, God, tell me you're planning a second chapter, PLEASE!

Now you should write the 'later' part. :)