Reviews for Welcome to Fog City
vanillavillian101 chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
Aww, so cute! I LOVE your writing style! Please keep up the fantastic work!

PS. Can you do a fanfic where Dean gets jealous of Sam spending so much time with another boy for either a school project or metioning him a lot in college? Please?
hevaann chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
The metaphor about Sam's mind and the doorway was my favourite part.
Rae Montgomery chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
I am in love with all your fics! This must be the dozenth time that I've come back to read this, and I swear it gets better every time. I can't believe I haven't reviewed this before because you are seriously one of my favorite authors and the reason that I started liking wincest in the first place. Somehow you've captured the essence of who the boys are and taken their relationship to the next level, and you somehow made it seem like the only logical step! I hope to see some new fics from you in the future because you manage to write Sam and Dean the very best! :)
Kokoroyume chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
Another great story :)

Thank you !
Ferine Lupine chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
Wow... I don't even like Wincest, But I'm hooked on this!
ChasingProse chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
Too lazy to sign in. This was beautiful. I love the metaphors of the fog and Sam's mind being an astronomical house. Remind me of this love hate relationship I had once.
Sotobow chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
First, awesome title.

Second, this is such a great story. They're so sweet together, and yeah, Dean so knew what Sam didn't. And this - "I know you," Dean said. "You-you're what I know best." - is amazing.

Wonderful work.
Yin Young chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
,its sososo so soso cute,so beautiful,wowo,i love it so much,hahha,u r amazing~!love it!
LunaNigra chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
They are adorable... or something.

Like your Dean, he is really Dean! And Sam.

Luna
supernaturalsammy67 chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
omg...so strong, so raw and soo amazing

wonderfuly written as always hun!

so powerful and so beautiful
Orange Autumn chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Awesome! The convos, the progression, just all pieced together really well to make a very engaging story! You're so good with the conversation and making it become the plot for the story. I'm terrible with that. My convos just end up meaning nothing and making the story I'm trying to write odd, lol. So great job! I love all your stuff. :D
SketchGal2 chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
I have to say I really enjoyed your story here!

You are a very talented writer, and I hope to get the chance to read more of your work )

You have Sam and Dean down pact. Also I know this will probably never happen in the television show, but if it does then your story will be translated to the show.

I mean this is seriously how I imagined Dean and Sam being open about their feeling for one another.

I mean there is a lot of underlying wincest in the show and eventually something like this will happen. xD

Sorry I'm rambling.

Once again I really enjoyed reading! I can't wait for more!
FlowerChild13 chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
It really makes my day everytime I open my inbox and see the alert that you have written a new story. :) This one is great as always. I love the little random details of their lives, they fit so well with their characters, and how everytime you bring the boys together in a new way and every way is all equally right. looking forward to your next story.
kitsunechibiko chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
So two things I want to say, and I'm not complaining or anything, just: I got confused by the breaks without time (did't know if it's chronological), and: Sam's eyes turned black? As in demon? And that ruined Dean's...what? Expectations for being with Sam to be awesome and whole?

Yeah. I got lost and lost on the last sentence. Please clarify? Again, I'd like to stress that I'm not trying to be annoying, I'd just luv to luv the entire fic. So, much luv to you and your fic. It's the best slash I've read; I luv how you transition to the Wincest. Luv Dean's smarts. Never thought he'd be as smart as his brother. Really. I've never heard anyone make him smart. Yes, he's got all this demon info and deductive reasoning, but he's never been that smart before, like, brilliant. I like it. Again, much luv.
KYwitch chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
You express yourself so beautifully-you have a way with words that make them come alive.