so bittersweet...but so well written and oh so amazing!

So sad, but still so utterly beautiful. I will be coming back to read this more than once :)

Wondrful, horrible, marvelous! The ending silence is breathtaking...

Wow. Just wow. Absolutely fantastic. There are some bits of conversation where you didn't add punctuation but I'm more than willing to overlook them. This was stunning. I loved it. This was so cerebral and devastating, without being "spelled out" in distracting literalness. The use of nuance, instead, was perfect. Great job!

You're super good. It's so subtle. Not many people write like you do.

Please don't let this be the end .

This is sad but beautiful. It deserves more reviews! You need some sort of an epilogue though to end things properly regardless of whether she gets her memories back or not.

So I had to read your other fan fiction and of course I cried. Bah! I am such a softie, esp. any thing Zelink. To the point, it was a really good fan fiction. Great job!

Please, , do not tell me that is the end? It sounded like the end. D:

Continue with it! I'd like to know how she gets her memory back. Or even if she ever does get it back. I feel for Link. It must be very painful for him to be near Rose/Zelda but have her not remember him...

Well written too, though I found it strange that they had sex after meeting each other like a few days before.

Cheers

Even from the summary, I suspected this would be something special - was not disappointed. I really like how delicately you bring forth pieces of the backstory, and I think it gives a sense of hope to the story even if the ending words suggest otherwise.

Just one suggestion: "This isn't anything any other good woman would do." I think you mean "wouldn't do"? Or maybe a slightly different rephrase so it's not so confusing with all those double-negatives :)

Putting you on Author Alert because I'm hoping you'll keep up stories of this caliber...