very nicely written. i like your version of this.

Wonderful. Simply wonderful.

Uh, wow. Um, this was just-wow. halkdhfstlkaghhvbieafhbahbog lan. You have rendered me incoherent. Guh. Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. Favoriting...now.

OMG MY HEART. YOU'VE KILLED ME. THIS IS BEAUTIFUL AND JUST SO SDOIHSIODGH:SODGH:SD I'M LITERALLY CRYING.

ALL CAPS BECAUSE YOU DESERVE THE AWESOMENESS.

Amazing and very moving. And sad, yopu prtrayed Molly's emotions so so well. *sniffles* Good job.

Hellooo!

It has been FOREVER since I've read a fic of yours - and now I remember why I loved them all so much in the first place. Your writing is incredible.

This was totally heartwrenching. Fred's death devestates me and even more so knowing how Molly already lost her brothers. I loved the way you portrayed Molly's relationship with Fabian - very real, as always, and touching. How he was louder and bolder, but needed Molly's protection more - brilliant.

Great job.

Squid

A-MAZE-ING!

Aww, I loved this piece. So sad.

Wordy

PS. Tiredtiredtired.

This is...so ridiculously amazing and sad and wonderful and perfect (I'm running out of adjectives)! I loved it, all of it, from the moment between Fabian and Molly to her (depressing, but beautifully-written) thoughts on their deaths, to the aftermath of Fred's death...I just loved it. It was amazing. I don't really know what else to say :P

Beautiful work, and keep writing!

How sad. I like the parales between Fred and Fabian.

Awww, this was really good, it was amazingingly sad :(

i loved it :) so very sad and haunting but beautifully written

Wow! I just realized that Fabian and Gideon start with the same letters as Fred and George. This story, and a lot of other things, make so much more sense to me! Great job! :)

This is beautiful and so so sad. I really like fics where authors draw parallels between Fabian and Gideon and Fred and George and you did this wonderfully. There's so much emotion behind the words and it may not have made me cry, but it made my heart ache so much which shows how deep this emotion is. I like how you show the difference between Fabian and Gideon and consequently the difference between Fred and George.

Just beautiful.

Such an inspired, emotional piece. I simply adored everything about it. It really did break my heart, I can't stop crying over this :)