Aw, it's over? Darn. *sighs* Oh well... Sequels are good! *hint hint* :)

Have I ever mentioned I love T'narr and Jaythen stories? You write them so well! Actually, I think I just love all your Star Wars stories :) And this one in particular was fantastic!

Great job, I hope to see more of these in the future!

I love T'narr/Jaythen stories! I was so thrilled to see that you'd posted another one of these that I literally squeaked :) My roomate now thinks I'm crazy... *shifty eyes*

You have such an amazing way of writing the angst and the inner struggles that T'narr and Jaythen have to go through. I love it! I nearly cried at some points of this...

Anywho, kudos! I can't wait to see some more chapters from you!

Awesome, as usual! I really like these characters and the story line! It's really great! I think you should try doing another long story, with Jaythen and T'narr but also with Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon! I would really like to see more of the relationship between the two teams! I love the story! Keep up the good work and upload another soon!