| Reviews for A New Chance At Life |
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Aurastar Warrior chapter 21 . 6/21 togetic are flying and fairy |
Aurastar Warrior chapter 14 . 6/21 I'm really hoping ash is able to turn into a latios and he and Latvia's end up together |
Aurastar Warrior chapter 13 . 6/21 golduck is a psychic type. |
Aurastar Warrior chapter 10 . 6/20 steel type moves are weak to ground but super effective to rock |
sasukesdoom chapter 26 . 6/16 really cool story! thanks for sharing |
Anonymous chapter 7 . 6/15 This is so great! I love how you make it seem like it was canon! Please keep writing, I want so much more! Also, considering the fact that school is almost over and I have nothing to read, this is a great time passer! |
midnightscar17 chapter 3 . 5/26 I hope he doesnt just use latios only. Ive been very reluctant to read this story because of that issue |
mercurya2000 chapter 27 . 5/22 This was a pretty fun story. Characters were amusing, interesting premise. Ny biggest issue is that you use 'sweat dropped' way to often in my opinion. A few would be fine, but that's a descriptor that fits visual media way better than written. There's a few others you used excessively, like blushing, but none of them were as obtrusive as swear dropped to me. Like I said, I did enjoy this though. |
mercurya2000 chapter 13 . 5/21 Dear God seeing requests for battle revolution and brawl dated this chapter so hard I had to laugh. Good story so far. Can't wait for the reveal. |
Kaiser Chris chapter 22 . 4/29 I really didn't like this chapter and it is the worst part about the fic. Lance would never try to take someone else's Pokemon, even a legendary Dragon pokemon by force and it is way too OOC for him considering his character in the games and anime. It's a stupid conflict that should never have happened and is just Lance Bashing to prove how strong Latios and Latias are. |
Guest chapter 27 . 4/7 this fanfic is AWSOME! I love it! |
Soul-Seeker-1406 chapter 27 . 3/27 I mean to say you make it out like without latios the guy is even more incompetent trainer than Jessie and James, I mean dude wtf it's like he doesn't even know which Pokemon are which type so all choices of Pokemon and movesets are decided by Brock and Misty. seriously that's some shit going on. |
Soul-Seeker-1406 chapter 27 . 3/27 nice job at making ash even more incompetent than the anime itself which is an admirable feat |
Mainak chapter 27 . 1/25 Just finished the story , and gotta say it's amazing . Though i hope unlike the anime , pokemon actually evolve around this time , and remember that as was not as naive in advanced series as he was in the classic and Johto Journeys . |
yukirobinson58 chapter 1 . 1/24 I love it so far. |