Just delightful:-)

ROFLH! Brilliant! Sounds like this might be a case where NEITHER side wants our Heroes!

Only Hogan and his crew could talk their way out of being dead...

hehehehehe

Quite cute.

This one is pretty good too. I'm enjoying your work so far.

I read this a long time ago and loved it although (shame on me) I didn't leave a review. So I read it again today, and I am in stitches. Absolutely brilliant, and absolutely hilarious. You are an HH genius.

LOVE IT!

You had me laughing out loud, especially over Hogan choosing Crittendon! Although if I'd been in his place, I don't know if I would have gambled it. If they actually had brought Crittendon, he would have been the most UNHELPFUL person possible. I'd have rather had Alfie the Artist, or Malcolm Flood, with some kind of excuse about how as spies their true rank was not bandied about. Or maybe General Barton- he seemed pretty gruff and more than a little feisty, and more than capable of handling some bureaucrats...

But the one question I have for you is: do they all remember their waiting room experience, or just Hogan?

Keep up the excellent work!

Delicious! Absolutely delicious!

It took me a good five minutes to stop laughing after this one. You may not use a lot of description in this one, but it doesn't need it.

This was funny! Makes me wonder if Hogan could sweet talk his way around the devil and still come out ahead:-). Great job!

Thank you for kindly COMPLETING your stories in a timely manner. There are so many other authors who have incomplete stories sitting around now literally for weeks, months, and even years.

This story's so funny! I laughed 'til I cried!

(It didn't take long to get what was implied!)

The character's voices are wonderfully written;

Both Peter and Louis are equally smitten

With one of the girls at the counter; but she,

Has no interest in Peter, or even Louis!

Hogan, meanwhile, is trying to find

A way to return, and with presence of mind

comes up with a notion that can't be ignored;

His solution so perfect, I practically roared!

Newkirk, frustrated at waiting so long,

complains to LeBeau, who agrees that it's wrong.

My favorite line from LeBeau seemed so right;

"I was going to make tripe in white wine tonight."

Newkirk's response had me howling again!

"So you're saying we could have been worse off, then."

Excellent story! So funny and smart!

Thank you for sharing! A true work of art!

Too funny. Clever idea and very good execution of it.

This is without a doubt one of the funniest things I have ever read. You have the characters down pat from Hogan sweet-talking their way out of death to LeBeau and Newkirk and their bickering to Carter having a nervous breakdown worrying about exams, etc. Seems like the name Crittendon causes panic no matter where the guys are. Nice to see the guys were sent back to fight another day.

This has got to be one of the funniest stories I've ever read on this site. Boy, Hogan can sweet talk his way out of anything. The regulations, the panter between everyone, and the confusion of the "um" clerks...reminds me of the Gonculator and the supply sergeant, not to mention a certain scene in a certain movie I won't name so I don't give anything away. Surprised they didn't have tickets like a bakery!