I am glad he finally took a chance :)

YES. yes yes YES! I always loved Mal and KayleeXDXD this was sooo good! You just can't take Kaylee from Serenity3

I love this pairing. Lovely writing, you kept them very much in character. Thank you for a good read. :)

How pretty and lovely and sweet and passionate and a little mind-mixed-up. Though I would like to think that Kaylee wouldn't rush into something like accepting Simon's offer without really thinking it through - I also feel that she could've been blinded by what she thought she wanted. My only hope is that when she's done she really does want Mal and isn't just testing the waters. I loved every little bit -thanks.

Cheers Jen

Aw, so sweet, I love this pairing. Despite all the Mal and Kaylee goodness, I think my favourite line was this one about Simon - "He moved aside the cardboard box and stepped with as much grace as he could around the strewn tools and engine parts" - I could picture this perfectly!