Reviews for Broken Soul
DarkZoul chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Oh boy! These two need to accept CM Punk into their lives, just let them keep the hair lol

seriusly, I love how this fic is all dark, I like it and the way you write hooked me up! I think they will only find salvation on each other, or I hope they do because he won't admit it but he is addicted and if he keeps with it he will lose everything! But maybe they need to hit rock bottom before bouncing back, I hope the do

amazing
mketemkokwe chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
This is a good story, I like that you took the story with the "darker" lyrics, and you do make it dark. Hoping to getting an update in the near future for this story.
Nadia26 chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
Just wow...:)This is an other aspect of a Chris/Stephanie pairing and I can't help but being addicted to this story!:)
Daniella Consuela chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Wow. An addict he is not? I believe he truly is. He has to keep telling himself he's not addicted yet that normally means someone is. This story is incredible. You do a wonderful job touching something as sensitive as this subject matter and not making it out to be tasteless or real, real offensive. I wonder what cause Stephanie and Chris on this downhill spiral. It's so sad yet your story compels me so much. I have to keep reading. It's scary but oh so wonderful. I must have some background or history...well, not must. LOL! They..wow..I'm wondering if at all how these two will make a completely turn around and pick their messy lives up off the ground. God I love this. Seems Chris was upset at not having Stephanie say she was coming back for the night..real upset. Even if they just save each other and don't end up together that'll be our couple in a connection. Any is good, even though romantic is best. ;-p It seems their connection is more than sex. Wonder why they're doing this...but anyway before I ramble on and on. Awesome job. And I'm worried Chris taking a hit before working..so not good. Seems he's letting himself fall further downhill. More soon please. You do this subject justice. You researched?
TakerTakeMe chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
Wow, you're right, this is darker than anything I've ever read from you. You're venturing into something you don't do but I couldn't tell because it just flows. Normally I could never picture them in these roles. I could picture them having a little too much to drink sometimes but I never would've expected them to turn out this way. The thing is, your words totally created the image in my mind, I could totally "see" this.

I find it very interesting how Chris keeps failing drug tests and Stephanie keeps covering for him. Are they just two people participating in a sordid affair together, or is there something more? It sounds like she's paying a lot of money to keep those results from coming out.

Taking a hit before his match is a bad idea. I can think of so many things that can go wrong. It's dangerous for both Chris and his opponent. One wrong move and everything could be ruined! He doesn't think he has an addiction but he's always craving a hit. I think he really does have an addiction.

Can't wait to read more, incredible first chapter!

~J
Jodi chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Oh, how I adore this, so vey very much. I love fucked up Chris and Steph and there is no more fucked up that being a drug addict and an alcoholic. Stephanie has the lesser of the two evils, but it's still rock bottom. Chris says he's not an addict, but he so obviously is, so obviously.

And the fact no one has noticed? They must be some hell of a actor to hide it from the world, and only show it to each other. It's like they're drowning and neither of them can reach a hand out to stop the other from falling under, so they just sink deeper until it's too late.

I have no clue where you're going with this, but it's going to be amazing, I just know it is and I so cannot wait to see where you take them and see how much more they're going to fall, but I hope at one point one of the is going to fight to the surface and drag the other with them.

I so want more.

Jodi
Carolina chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Wow, you weren't kidding when you said this was really dark. I like the realism and how you got into his mentality behind this addiction. And it is an addiction, no matter what he thinks. Stephanie isn't much better really. I wonder how and why they both started getting into these vices. I am curious to see where you go with this and Chris taking a hit before wrestling just spells disaster. Can't wait to read more. :)
missbean1997 chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
I love it! It has such a different dynamic its really great to see Steph and Chris in a diferent light...
wrasslinlvr20 chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
This is a masterpiece in the making! Like seriously where do I start? Chris is a drug addict and Stephanie is alcoholic. Well Chris claims he's not an addict but reading how this chapter ended, I beg to differ. So considering that Chris snorted off of Stephanie's stomach kinda makes me think that she's kinda like his drug mention him being addicted to her taste but I mean right after he had his hit, he had to have a hit of her. Even in her drunken state,like you wrote "her body knew what to do." having sex with him is like routine, like a habit? Something that threw me off was when Steph said she wasn't going to meet chris later that night and so he decided to use? He said he like stephanie because she understands his using, but the ending seemed like he was using because of her? GOSH! I feel like I'm rambling! haha! But I love this fic already. Its so dark almost raunchy yet still 100% smoochy! This is amazing Nina! I can't wait till you update :D
Glamagirl chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Dark and angsty is my favorite kind, it's a guilty pleasure of mine and... well, what can I say, this one is captivating.

They are both in a path of self destruction, together! Not the most romantic of scenarios but if they pull through they can also do it together.

Another failed test, I wonder what will happen...

Great way to start a story ;)
dodjet chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Oh no, I don't like that he's fixing to use right before a match :-( In fact, I don't like that he's using at all but right before a match is really dangerous. You're right, this is very dark and I'm not sure where it's headed which I find very intriguing. Hopefully this gets worked out but if you're only planning a 3-parter, I'm not sure how it can be worked out that fast. Can't wait to read more!