Oooooooooooooooooooh Lordy.

And moving on from my previous review you've made a couple of paragraphs sexier than pages of porn.

"The first sting of the needle surprised her, but she stayed still. She ran through Ancient coding in her head, the latest technical modifications she was learning, how good salted pretzels tasted to her now, how great Ronon was looking in denim. Her thoughts circled around that image for a while and her smile lingered."

I love this stream of conciousness, the sense of thoughts floating in an out, bumping along like a string of boats, very cool.

I really loved it. You should write another chapter or a longer story ! Thanks! Romelia is cool...

Very well-written and a great read. Thank-you. Please write more for this couple.

nice little one shot