That's so sad :'( why did you exaggerate his pain. Poor Draco!

i'm shocked. you've described this horrible scene so well it literally made me cry

i can't express how good your story is!

Wow this was really good! I think Rowling would have had this scene in the books if it weren't so gruesome. Keep writing stories like this!

i really liked this!

you're a very good writer.