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Whoot. Spread the master-student love! Brilliantly written. ;)

You end it right there! Evil, you should have continued it.

lol MOLESTATION. end of story X3

ehehehe... Fran is just so... smexable. Like a Varia-version of Tsuna, except cooler. Love :D

You make me wanna' review.

Badly.

I jumped that button.

Anyway:

LUV IT! XD

First, compliments, compliments, worship, and moar worshiping. All right, let's just say that we finally have different pairings on the update list. I iz sick of 1827 and 8059 everywhere~ and 69F is just adorable. Teacher/student m~hmm (ushishishi~ like D18, with the whips and chai - er)

And writing~ ohyeshh. I do like that lime/lemon tharr~ And finally a writing that's more soothing to the eyes instead of scarring. Luv it.

And Muku is such a perv.

But I think that has already been established thus far.

And Fran is berry kayoot~

HAH! Physical examination. I swear, Muku prolly was a specialist in the epic study of physiology in one of his older lives.

Yes, because he is an expert medical doctor on human anatomy.

And things you to be careful of~:

I think the ficcie is supposed to be in present tense throughout, but you have a tendency to switch to past tense.

EX.) "Fran jumps in surprise, immediately scooting to the left to put some distance between him and his looming master. Warning bells rang inside his head as Mukuro’s eyes glinted rather ominously under the candlelight."

When really, the latter half should be: "Warning bells ring inside head as Mukuro's eyes glint rather ominously under the candlelight."

And also, grammatical mistakes. Some people tend to abuse certain grammar symbols. In your case, you are the other half of the majority - the type who lacks the usage of the former. Semi-colons, mostly.

EX.) "Frowning, Fran swats his hand at it, the sunflower immediately dispersing as it is hit."

Corrected: "Frowning, Fran swats his hand at it; the sunflower immediately dispersing as it is hit."

2nd Ex.) "Fran tried to suppress from shivering, groaning when he found that he couldn't, not under his master's touches."

Corrected: "Fran tried to suppress himself from shivering, groaning when he found that he couldn't - at least, not under his master's touches."

3rd Ex.) "His eyes widened as he recognizes them as shackles, rusty yet still effective on doing their job."

Corrected: "His eyes widen as he recognizes them as shackles; rusty yet still effective - "

You may keep the omitted words, though in my opinion, the result is the same with or without.

Overall it was greatt~~

~Rori~ 3

Mukuro is so twisted, got to love him and its so funny to see Fran affected. He's usually so reserved, even when he was knifes sticking out of his back.

I love you, have my babies...okay thats a little extreme but none the less, man i need to start writing for this pairing again i really do. needs so much more love! :)

anywhoo awesome fic me deary, as always~

This was good! Ganbatte! The world definetly needs more MukuroxFran.

Mukuro x Fran is ADORABLE; we need more of this pairing! I love it when smut still keeps the IC-ness; well done!