| Reviews for See Me, Hear Me |
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   Starr123 chapter 15 . 9/5/2011 I've just read it from start to finish so in a way this review is for all 15 chapters :) I love the idea of them all being teenagers! I also like how you've included Elliot and Ric as teachers just because their slightly older :L This is a great story and i really like how you've written Jac and Joseph.. and the ending was extremely cute! - Freya xx |
| emergency-heart chapter 15 . 3/26/2011 At first I thought this story was a little unrealistic, however after a few more reads I've realised that's what makes this ff so lovely. It's like the perfect Jac/Joe fairytale, Something that as a big Jac/Joe fan I really loved. I liked how you took the main characters from Holby and made them into their 17 year old selves, you made it really believable which must've been really tricky to write. Keep up the good work! Kat x (PS. I write Jac/Joe ff's too. I'd be really grateful if you had a look at my first attempt 'Heart of Glass' as I'd love to know what you think!) x |
| Kiefercarlos chapter 15 . 9/18/2010 OMG ! WOW ! Awsome ! Iv loved this story since you started writing and im so sad that its come to an end but at least you did it well and didnt just leave us hanging :D Hope everything gets back on track for you soon :D |
| cutiehooty chapter 15 . 9/18/2010 Cries i was really enjoying that shame its finished very good though |
| Ellis chapter 15 . 9/17/2010 love love love! such a perfect ending, jac Joe love love love hope you are feeling better my lovey, and do text me about your big life changing decision coming up xxxx |
| PinkDaisy4 chapter 14 . 8/20/2010 The whole story os brillant and i hope you update soon :):) |
| cutiehooty chapter 14 . 6/4/2010 brilliant maybe Jac and Joseph could get a bit more intermate with each other or maybe something could happen that brings something back from Jac's past |
| passed chapter 14 . 5/31/2010 Another fab chapter! Especially with more stupid exams looming on the horizon. :( Quite predictable & very HC but what if Jac's Mom comes back from India now? Try to work it out...which they do for a while but her Mom is an even more emotionally abusive person. And a step-dad with family who are just like her Mom... Jac falls into depression, leads to committing suicide unsuccessfully...Jac becoming even more of a rebel/cold bitch/distant from people... Y'know... I think I really should stop watching dark/depressive programs! |
| CassidyTVNut chapter 14 . 5/31/2010 awwwww cutsie :) i love :D and as for what should come next...there are many possibilities -someones pregnant -someones ill -new relationship -break up (not jac/joe or maddy/linden though) -someones on drugs have fun with the ideas, great chapter! :) x |
| cutiehooty chapter 13 . 5/23/2010 PMSL that was great |
| Nightlife Eyes chapter 13 . 5/22/2010 wow look what i found! lol yay! told you if you updated i'd review and here it is! it was a good update, i'd have loved more jac/joe-ness as always (you know me i'm kind like a junkie when it comes to the of them, it's sad but true!) can't wait for more! good luck in your exams! |
| CassidyTVNut chapter 13 . 5/22/2010 woo woo woo :) great chapter, made me laugh and gave a lot away about the characters :) continue, or I will hunt you down :P x |
| kiefercarlos chapter 12 . 4/25/2010 this is an amazing story ! too bad you cant update more frequently :D Hope the next one is as good as the previous :D |
| Nightlife Eyes chapter 12 . 4/24/2010 YAY an update! tho i can't wait for the party, it's sad i can't think of any non alcohol heavy party games isn't it? lol |
| cutiehooty chapter 12 . 4/24/2010 Jac and Joseph more soon please |
