Hello :)
I'm not sure if I haven't already written to you, but I just feel like I need to.
Please, please continue. Not many people has a talent like you. It is a great story, fantastically written. It makes my heart ache. Please, don't let a talent like that just slip by!
So please, make us, the readers, happy, and continue: for yourself, and your fans...
Good luck :)
PS: Oz's POV would be great :)

I hope you write more of this story, it's interesting~ :D (Geez, squigglies can come in handy, huh...?) But yeah, looking forward to future chapters!

D'awwwm, you never updated again! I hope you continue ine day, because I really wanted to see where this story was going... TT-TT

Ah, so interesting but appears to be discontinued... :/

Dammit, I so wanna know sequense with Oz and Gil! *O*

I can't believe I'm begging right now...but PLEASE update this. PLEASE.

What's wrong with Gil? And why was Oz gone? They're the same age? So if I'm going to picture them Oz would look more like Jack?

I think you should do that. it sounds interesting

pLEASE uodate soon

beautifully written and definately hav the gil to oz relationship right, but if u want 2 continue u'll hav 2 explain with good reasoning why oz hasn't been there, since obviously they are very close. i think its worth continuing. (:

Interesting. So does he have TB? And if so why isn't he in quaratine since he's contagious? Is it something else? Like Lung Cancer?

So is Oz the same age as Gil? Physically, as well? Since in the manga (I haven't seen the anime yet) they were the same age and then he was sent into the Abyss and came out the same age as went in.

So in AU verse it can go both ways same age and ten year difference. lol.

So will Vincent be his blood brother? He is in the manga (or we assume so since before the Abyss tragedy happened they were both adopted/brought into the household by Jack V. and then they were flung into Oz's time). What about the other Nightray children? Will they play a part as well?

Poor Gilbert... I always feel so bad for him.

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next!

-Ray

Update!

And yesm I do agree with you that the fandom needs more love! So...

Update! Hehe...

this gil intrgues me!

I like it... and the 1st person Gil is great too.

Please write more! I like this!

Oh my gosh, I adore this~!

I hope you decide to update soon~!

This seems like a good idea. You should continue writing it, even if you don't post it. At least see where you go with it.

Though I would really love to see what you do with it!

as for perspective, watch it when you're writing that you don't switch. You had one line where it was third person, but the rest was all in first.

If you want to, you can switch perspectives while you're writing, but it's nice if you give the readers a warning.

Can't wait to see what you decide!