This played out so nicely, and yeah, I can totally see that... and yet, it made me long for a third part in which the rest of it unfolds. :)

thanks, good

i was totally giggling throughout both chapters ;) i kinda wish ziva would have gotten a shot in, but that would probably result with tony in the hospital so i guess it's better that she didnt ;) loved it like i always do. there really isn't a single fic of yours that i havent liked...

Haha, bathroom guy strikes again!

I was worried you couldn't top the first chapter of this. I was oh so wrong. Ahmygosh! Elevator groping! Disamrmament. "I’d go get you again, but I don’t want it to come to that." them, utterly them, and aw, and I love how it ends, and I just love it in general. I like everything you're writing lately.

lol. fun. thanks

Very nice. I liked it a lot

very good.

LOL, DMAS! I giggled the entire time I was reading this. Could see it actually happening on the show, which is something I always enjoy in fanfiction. And as usual, you have a way with the characters- esp Tony. I still say you're secretly a writer on the show...

Now this is classic Tony and Ziva.

And you did it so well.

I feel like I am in the elevator.

And the checking out her girlness on Tony's part...perfectly Tony.

I enjoyed this MUCHLY

And can't wait for the next chapter!

I do so love your work.

i loved! it. it was practically perfect.

I like that you have drawn in the parallel between Ziva & Damon that was in the eppy and used it to move the relationship between Ziva & Tony forward. Loved the use of the elevator and Ziva leaving behind her weapons with the girl from legal (although after the last one from Legal, not sure if that was a wise move ). Also like that Gibbs was keeping a subtle eye on what was going on and calling time-out for today's elevator antics. Would really love to see this go to the next level and see the dinner between the two.

“I just worry. I…you almost…I’d go get you again, but I don’t want it to come to that.”

- gah. perfect. if only he'd say something like this on the show. perfect. just so perfect.

“Uh…sorry. I was talking about us.”

“Us?”

“That’s English. Means you,” he pointed to her, “and me,” he concluded, pointing to himself. “The two of us, together…” He glanced around. “In an elevator.”

- perfect. :)

“Tony…”

“What? What do you want me to say?”

“Just…whatever you are thinking.”

“Really?”

“Yes,” she confirmed reluctantly.

He considered her thoughtfully for a few moments. “Can I touch your boobs again?”

“No!”

He shrugged. “Worth a try.”

- LOL FOREVER. this needs to be on the show, too haha.

“Dinner, huh?” He pretended to consider her offer. “Hm. That’s like double-lunch.”

“Do not make it a competition.”

“But I’m winning!”

- hahaha. :)

oh, i love your fic, thank you so much for it. :) i hope you write more since we still have WEEKS until a new ep! :( please? :)

Congrats on story 100. I like your take on the whole Tony/ Ziva/ Werth story line, and the point (no matter how annoying it is to admit) he can understand her on a level that Tony cant due to similar experiences. Also, I loved how well you wrote each of the characters, McGee was especially hilarious. Looking forward to your next story.

I just realized this is your 100th story! Congratulations! The amazing thing is they are all worth reading.

Great second chapter. Pretty restrained actually. Just as funny, though ("Can I have hooks? That might be cool." "Until you get lonely." LMAO).

Please keep them coming. Hope one day to be reading your 200th story.