Awww...short, but cute :) Nice!

...lol a very confusing Owen right over there. Is it Kathy or is it Akari? -)

Hello! Gonna review chapter by chapter even though this thing is complete xD That was so funny! Owen using what Akari said against... Nice!

Cute story, i like it! D

I really liked your story. It's really cute! There is one part in Owen's POV where he says "How could Chloe know about my crush on Owen." I'd thought I'd just point it out.

nice job... just 3 probelms: Sum annoying mistakes here and there, i didnt like teh fact that u hated both Gill and Selena. I seriously didnt find Selena that bad of a character... and i LUV Gill! Hes the only 1 MENT 4 me in this game!

you do know that your last chapter you put up is actually an update for a different story right? my guess is some twilight fic? thats what i thought :P you should fix it and then update correctly very soon cause this story isnt actually half bad so far :D

Ah, Chase. Love him but hate him, the little bugger.

It appears to be a rather interesting story so far. I would like to see more of it, so I hope you continue writing and updating this.

-Demon

This story seems interesting! Please do continue! Well great job with this so far! I can't wait until the next update! Until then keep up the awesome work! :]

I really like this story so far! :D it's good writing and there aren't annoying punctuation mistakes

update soon!

N&E