Cool idea so far and please write more thanks.

Good , please update.

update plz plz plz plz its addicting so plz update.

Hi, I thought this was really good. I can't wait to hear from more of this story. I think you are a great writer, and that's why I think you should do more of these. Like on LJ Smith's website, she has all these short stories and one of them was Brionwys Lullaby. I think maybe you should read it, if you haven't and maybe continue along the story. I would really appreciate it since I've been waiting forever for her to update her story, on her site. Please if you can start off where she left off. I would love you! Other than thought I thought this story was awesome!

Yeah, it was great, keep writing!