This is such a tragedy. Victoria was a gentle vulnerable character in need of care and nurture, respect and encouragement in her independence. She didn't even need a relationship neccesarily...maybe just a good friend. this is so sad and dark. It's like some of the horrid bella edward stories but where edward helps her out of the james situation or something but vicki didn't get that chance. This is hard to read. well written though, just horrific.

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They should have Charlie teach sex-ed to kindergarteners!

I love these out takes; they are soooo Cool. sort of how, in Twilight, Edward recounted to Bella the Big Fight they had at the Cullens after the Van incident; I always wanted to be "the fly on the wall" for THAT discussion. Glad she got to it in Midnight Sun!

This is even better than when Charlie was describing it to Edward! "... dead, cold, and buried in the ground." that just SLAYS me. *falls over, snickering*

Uh...never mind about the outtake

I loved these out takes but I couldn't read Charlie's breakdown or the ones about Victoria and Abby or anything at the cabin. yeah, I'm a wuss!

From start to finish, the original story and the out takes, this has been an incredible journey. You gave every person so much character and life. Thank you.

Best,
Kelly

Really good outtakes. Thanks so much for ending in a happy one!

THANK GOD THATS ONE GIFT I NEVER GOT.

POOR CHARLEY HE JUST CANT CATCH A BREAK.

JASPER REALLY IS A GOOD GUY AND HE LIKES BELLA TOO

ALICE CAN GET ANYBODY TO DO ANYTHING