Omg I loved it it was so sweet :)

I feel like sometimes dubs don't portray the emotions well. Japanese has more 'mmph' to it and more dramatic

But I respect your opinion. Sometimes it's nice to just hear them talk and not read and watch at the same time

Your biggest hurdle is your tense structure. Choose a tense and stick with it. Right now it looks like your trying to write like Hemmingway which is a tense concept to create enthusiastic excitement and confusion. Try 3rd person omnipotent and stick with that.

I’m speechless...

OMFG THAT WAS AMAZE BALLS Btw, I Prefer subs on most anime, but others I like being dubbed. I like sub B/c I know Japanese XD so it's kind of Habit to automatically translate, and Some dubs, like on an anime that will not be named *cough* Yuri *Cough* On Ice *Cough* ,Have an Actor that plays a Smexy Beast who will not be named *Cough*(Viktor Nikiforov AKA Daddy)*Cough* That sounds like fucking Gru XD Lol Now I'm Rambling so I'm Just gonna go read Some Mystic messenger Yaoi or something (something meaning X reader Smuts) \_(ツ)_/ CAN YOU BLAME ME?! okay Bye ;-;

Omigod this was beautiful! I don't know how to believe it's only your first time writing in ToraDora. Well done!

Great fanfic and I agree Dubs are better!

hermoso

OOOOOOHHHHHHHH MY GOD IM A FUCKIN PERVERT Well I needed it anyways a]... Haha...Ah

NOICE

is he a milk factory or something? this isn't hentai! he came 4 times... but nevermind, it was well written, still a bit O.O.C...

Okay good. I pretty much only watch dub (sub only when I REALLY want to see it and its not dubbed yet) and everyone thinks I'm nuts. Dub is good though!

Great job. I'd like to see more but I feel like a pervert now haha.

Great fanfic, I love this shipping

They didn't use a condom so now I really want a sequel of Taiga being pregnant cause of this *hehe derp*