Awesome story.. I sorta wish it was a two shot though. :/

It was a very interesting one-shot, but I feel like it could turn into a two-shot, just because I really want to see what happens next. It's like you left your readers hanging on a thread, a thread that makes us ask ourselves "What's gonna happen?", "Is she really falling for him?", I love that feeling of suspense xD :3 Nice work ;3

ohmigosh! this was SO CUTE! ahhaha can you add more chapters? heehee i would be so happy if you did!

could you please please please if u have time do more chapters for this story? .

That was a surprisingly cute one-shot.

Nicely done, I hope to read more soon :)