loved the story.. i love the oral act too.. but moreso.. a hot unprotected real sex make he happy when i sperm deep inside her vagina.. all my loads.. and feels i had make her preggg..

Oh my god your 12?!

Nah it's cool I wrote fanfiction like this at that age too.
Cute story

Holy shit! You were 12 when you wrote this? I can't write shit like that and I'm 17

Your only 12yrs and you wrote this WOW I'm amazed.

I really liked this story I thought is was really good. One of the very best I read. Kepp it up. I can't wait to see what you write next. _

Wow 12 and your this good? I didn't even get into yaoi till I was 13 and I now 15 and still can't write good smut I need more practice (/)/(\)

That's awesome and btw power to the nasty 12 year olds I'm nasty too!haha

o.o you are soo kidding right? 12 year old? :DD good job!

Ah, yes. I remember when I was but a humble 12 year old of my own, that used to read these things throught the night. . . WHO AM I KIDDING! I STILL DO! XD Well my compliments. You got some skill for a twelve year old . . . or older.

Lol 12 ._.

You're older than me by about a year x)

Continue to write bad stuff :D I luvv it!

Well..I'm a perverted 17 year old...O_o

But it's not wrong to be a 12 year old pervert..

I was once one, too :D!

Great fanfic..very amazing. It wasn't horrible at all.

OMG I really like these characters. Ur a GREAT author just because ur 12 doesnt change a thing, im a perverted 12 year old too *laugh* -O-

don't worry, i'm a perverted 12 year old too

XD I LOVE IT!

First ByaxUlqui fanfic I read. 8D (enough said xD) It was epic! .

WTF? you're 12!

don't be admitting your age when you write stuff like this...

Not bad, I should show my yaoi/ulquiorra-loving friend this