This story was pretty sweet. You don't see this pairing a lot and she was the only charachter that paid attention to Dib and didn't make fun of him. Nice job

I feel the need to come out of lurker mode to tell you how awesome this story you put together is! I don't see many Dib and Gretchen stories. I really, really enjoyed reading this through this fic though. I kinda wish it was longer cause it seemed like I got to the end so fast. XD Thank you for sharing your writing with us. It was a great read!

are you going to make more of this it's was very good and did Dib trying to asked Gretchen to marry him if that true i'm a genius now. i'm was happy to the end of this story man.

...

Okay, so, you are like the best Dib/Gretchen writer I've seen in a long time, and this whole thing was just wonderful and made me feel all fuzzy and warm inside and ajsdkfhdsk.

Good, GREAT job.

Wow, this story is so sweet . . . I love it! I don't really care for most IZ pairings, but I do like this one.

Alright! Way to go, three-dimensional version of Dib!

Of course, now I have the Beatles stuck in my head...

This was a great ending to a great little story arc. It had the short, concise feel of a well-done oneshot, but you managed to string it out into five chapters, each as good as the last.

Of course, Dib felt a little OOC, but that's what romance does. You could have made him stick a little closer to the obsessions we've come to know and love, but this wasw till a very solid, very enjoyable fic.

AWW, this is so wonderful an ending, though I'd like to see Gretchen say yes, it's still very touching.

The whole story is actually fantastic, showing how Gretchen helps Dib comes to be a well rounded young man, though obviously still with his paranormal drive.

Gretchen's character worked so well, twas an epic and lovely romance to use.

So yeah, overall, fantastic ending, very sweet, a little corny but that only adds to the loveliness of it (cos corny is good sometimes).

I'll be reading yo NEXT STORY BRAH.

Aw, that's cute. And touching. And a great way to end this collection.

Keep up the good work.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.

Well I have to say that this was very romantic and I loved it but dude you could have at least written him asking her to merry him and her saying yes and them kissing in the ship or something. Anyway I wish you good luck in the contest.

This is sweet but not corny. I snickered when Gretchen said she was worried about Zim, and Dib told her he'd "break into his house tomorrow and see how he's doing."

Hoora! Another update to the loveliness of this story. The relationship between Dib and Gretchen grows that little bit more each time and I also love the little snapshots we have of a hidden wider story with Zim.

I think Dib should let Gretchen drive the Runner, it'd be cute.

Anyways, yeah, the dialogue here was really nice, you could feel the sweetness between the two and they were both in character. Grechen makes up for affection where Dib does not, but on the other hand, Dib is clearly the more level headed and grounded of the two. You write them as a such a natural couple too, none of their interaction ever feels forced.

Can't wait to read more on this yo :D

Well I can see why you don't want to enter this one in the contest as much as the next one. Mostly because in this one they are not on a date or talking about eachother for most of the thing they talk about poor Zim who I hope is o.k. Anyway good story I said AWW when Dib named The Gretchen. Anyway I look forward to the next one and hope you get it up in time. This is invaderzimfannumber1 signing off. PS I don't like it when Zim is not trying to tkae over the earth in your stories it's funnier that way and I have never liked it when he finds out about his mission be a fake and then going all depressy like. It is funny when he finds out about it and goes all regvenage like.

Aw, the ending's touching. Meanwhile, I found Dib's obsession with the ship's appearance incredibly funny for some reason.

Keep up the good work.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.

I really hope you update this soon, it's great!

That's CRAZY. XD