Awww my hearttttttt

I adore this, the title couldn’t be more fitting to describe this piece of work. I always thought it was stunning but I can identify with it in my own special way now, thank you for creating it.

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I WANT THIS SOME ONE LOVE ME.

wow I've literally never read something that describes them SO well and I LOVED IT!

Such beautiful writing! Love your version of Lily and James 3

Wow. This is mind-blowing - I think that the second person perspective worked really well here! Lily and James are portrayed perfectly.

My lucky charm

This story is definitely beautiful. A change from where James is perfect and Sirius is usually the second one- I love this. :)

Perfect!

Such a great story, I love how James and Lily complement each other so well. :D

Aptly named, this is so beautiful! A great example of how imperfection can be perfect.

"I think we're more beautiful, because we're real". - yes, I love how imperfectly perfect they are.
This is wonderful.

Beautiful is right! This is ABSOLUTLY AMAZING! It has such a great message and the writing style is just perfect for it even though I usually can't get into stories in second person I didn't even notice it because you worked it so well! Amaze balls 3 xx

This is wonderful. I love how perfectly imperfect they are. You made Lily look like a real teenager, which is so rare in fanfiction. I like to see her being awkward and unsure of herself, I like to see her having doubts, having imperfect body and hairl, and stuff like that, because it makes her more real. It's more beautiful that way.