Reviews for Something Extraordinary
Dark Secret1 chapter 18 . 11/8/2013
Although you seem to have given up on this story, I felt compelled to leave a comment.

Your work is absolutely amazing. I spent the last hours reading it even though I should study for my exams. Anyway, you kept Peter well in character. This task is not easy, many authors have failed. One could truly understand the (emotional) challenges he was/is going through. I was happy to see him come together with Emma * PEmma 4tw*

Angela Petrelli has been very a very passive character so far. It seems somewhat unlikely she wouldn't care who her only remaing son is dating, especially considering her reaction to Emma in "Vol. 5: Redemption". And I doubt Angela would let Nathan's "illegitimate daughter" (quote from Claire) become public knwoledge.

Btw, I caught the idead lifted from Babylon 5: people reveal their true selves while sleeping. This is the idead behind the sleep-watching-ritual Delenn puts Sheridan through. He of course doesn't get it XD
jeeperschrist chapter 18 . 3/23/2013
Such a good story! One of the best I've read! I hope you will consider updating!:)
silverhelix428 chapter 18 . 8/29/2010
This was a great chapter. It seriously was.

And I can only imagine what kind of craziness is going through Peter's head upon inheriting this ridiculous amount of property. Why do I sense that he's going to turn it into a safe house for Specials?

Dude, baby!Gray getting raised by Claude? That's kind of hysterical. And the unstoppable team of Gray and Bishop, working together again? Brilliant. I can't wait to see how that goes down.
AllisonSwan chapter 18 . 8/23/2010
loved this story!
johncorn chapter 18 . 8/23/2010
Finally a update and I can't wait for the interview
Forensic Photographer711 chapter 17 . 5/22/2010
Yay! You're back! That hiatus had me worried. It was upsetting to learn of the show's cancellation, but not everything good lasts, and there is awesome fanfiction like this to keep the spirit alive. Awesome chapter as always, I love how nearly everyone got a little moment. Claire and Zach, they definetely are something. Thier scene was very cute and Zach was very Zach, so that made me happy. Claire is gonna bite the bullet and give the interview huh? This shall be interesting. Loved the Elle and Claude scene, especially her ending line. Who knew Claude could be good with kids? I'm fairly certain Gabriel was my favorite part if the chaper, his interactions with everyone were so spot on, and there were a couple of lines that just had me cracking up, especially his slip about what Peter was doing at Emma's apartment. Enjoyed this installment and can't wait for the next one.
AllisonSwan chapter 17 . 5/20/2010
loved it
the s33r chapter 17 . 5/20/2010
This can only keep getting better.

You've inspired me to write my own post-Brave New World fic.

Thanks for the amazing read! :D

5/5, 110% AWESOME!
SkyHighFan chapter 17 . 5/19/2010
Thanks for the update. R.I.P Heroes. I had to hear about that from my MOM who doesn't even WATCH the show but read about it somewhere online. While I think they could've DEFINITLY done more with the show, they left it off at a pretty good place. Now its just up to us, the fanfiction fans to finish the amazing story.
Copycat 19 chapter 16 . 4/9/2010
I really like this story. I like how peter is beginning to get his powers back
Forensic Photographer711 chapter 16 . 3/31/2010
Yay! I'm finally caught up on Something Extraordinary! Exciting, no? This chapter especially opened up the possiblities of future intrigue and I can't wait to get past this happy time (not that I haven't enjoyed it, it's nice to see a majority of the characters not under duress) and into the enroaching darkness forshadowed. Like who in the world is stealing our reformed serial killers style? And to what point and purpose? And also where has that snot nosed reporter Remy been during all the festivities?

This chapter was loaded with Peema which I love! And yay they are now in lurve! All is right for the time being, which I can only assume mean it won't last. It was so cute how Mohinder and Matt were conmmenting on Pemma's cuteness during their snow ball fight. So much cuteness to be had except for poor Gabriel and Elle. Always getting interupted post sexy time, poor kids.

I really like where you are expanding on some characters, like Tracy but I'm missing some of the gang, like Micah and Molly, what are those two kiddos up to? And we have seen nothing of Ando and Kimiko. But your Hiro santa is probably the best thing ever so that makes up for it right now.

Can't wait for the next update!
Forensic Photographer711 chapter 11 . 3/31/2010
Oh my,you brought back Claude! I didn't think I could love this story any more than I already do! And the fact that you used Nine as a clue as to who he is just made my day. ] Another great chapter, although I wanna slap Mohinder something fierce. I told him not to fall for the feminine wiles and look what he does! Oh goodness. The fact that Elle likes Star Trek is priceless and the parallels she draws between the characters on the show and in her own life, amazing! Hesam is great, just the sort of friend Peter needs to liven him up and be there with a good side comment. And what was that whole blackout about hm, strange indeedy. Finally to tie this review to a close I'm so glad Micah proposed the idea of everyone getting together for Christmas, it will be nice to have the gang together without the end of the world ensuing.
VooDoo Lily chapter 16 . 3/31/2010
This review will include remarks on the last couple chapters in no particular order. The reference to Audrey was good. I liked her character on the show. Peter and Emma making a snowman and then having their own snowball fight? Super-cute. Loved Mohinder and Hiro (last chapter) noticing the chemistry that has resulted in Pemma. And Claude returns! How'd he get to Lake Placid? Did he come with Noah and Co.? And Zach and Claire have worked out their awkwardness! Awesome job all around. But I'm curious about Ando and Kimiko. They kind of disappeared. I assume they're spending some alone time together... :)
Forensic Photographer711 chapter 10 . 3/31/2010
Well, I did enjoy reading this chapter, a lot in fact. It amazes me how in character everybody is, even when they have just a few lines, like Tracy for instance and how she called Peter 'a senator's wimpy kid brother'. Tracy would so do that. I really wish this was how the next chapter would go on the show, honestly, you seem to understand the characters more than the writers would. But anyway I digress. Heck yeah you moved some ships along! Those babies are smooth sailing at the moment, which probably won't last I'm asuming but I can enjoy it now. Zach's kiss on the check and words of wisdom (of how did Claire ever manage without you?), Elle's heart wrenching confession, and Peter and Emma's wonderfully amazing moment! It was so shippy! I was quite happy. And kudos for making me actually like Janice. Well done. As for what the future holds let me just say I'd really like to give Remy a punch in the face, "making out with the little deaf girl" biotch please. Mohinder do not be wooed by her feminine wiles!
Forensic Photographer711 chapter 9 . 3/31/2010
Short and sweet, well only slightly sweet. That dream, well geez that's something quite stressful. These poor people never get a moments rest do they, something is always trying to take over the world, or the tri state area. But your rapport between Elle and Gabriel was genius, there little barbs at each other were so well placed (especially the jibe about Angela not being his mother) as well as their fluff. And Gabriel stealing her car is just the icing on the cake.
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