This was wonderful. I find myself wishing you would dispel some of the angst at the end of your fics. But, I love them all the same. :)

As much of a fan of Ami and Makoto being together as I am, I have to say I love how you wrote this short so that it's really left up to the reader to decide just what Ami and Makoto's relationship is.

This story is just what I was looking for this morning. Something short and sweet. Aside for a few minor typos, I think the biggest thing you could do for this story is to remove the opening disclaimer about the story not being verry good.

Just because it's short doesn't mean it's not good.

You can totally see that Ami feels more than friendship towards Mako-chan. It was so sweet how insecure she was. Believing she's just a distraction for Makoto, but willing to deal with it just to be with her. Makoto hasn't made the jump yet, but I bet Ami could make her see the light. ;-) It's more realistic this way. A very sweet and well written fic. Thanks for sharing.

hmm...cant really say it's more than friendship...seem more like a friendship thing between girls...? still it's sweet though :)

aw, that was so sweet. especially at the end where they hug ;)