Ooo, what a nice, shorter version of the original! I liked the plot of this one as well

Perfection. There is no other fitting word.

i loved it is there a sequel to this?

Beautiful. A great accompaniment to CotG.

"'I'm a monster, really,' he had wanted to say sometimes. 'I have two hearts and a thousand minds, and you don't know.'" He's never heard of The Doctor. He has two hearts and he's...not quite a monster. Time Lords in general have two hearts and aren't monsters. And they tend to live thousands of lives. Although, "every lonely monster needs a companion." [I love how this ties in so well with Doctor Who and it was written before that episode. xD!]

He can retreat yes, but he'd be relinquishing Metamorphosis, which is a risk.

This is honestly feeling worlds apart from CotG. Maybe because they were younger, freer, at a different point in their lives. But it feels like a completely independent story.

THE KISS! O gads. I love it! x3

Oh gads that was beautiful. I like CotG more, because it is longer, richer, takes us through their heads and lives more, but this 4shot does not suffer in any way because of that. It was still STUNNING! I adore the ending. Brava.

I admit to not understanding Harry's plan. Dance with Draco, flaunt his homosexuality, and just FORCE society to accept it with the force of his personality? That sounds flawed. Fundamentally.

Oh Harry is bold as hell. xD!

Harry's going to kiss him. I know it.

"Now, he wondered why he had been so intent on that respect. It was one thing to have esteem from people who mattered, who had ideals that you admired or power that you looked up to, but Lucius wasn't one of those people." Well damn.

Uh oh. Draco's got you, Harry.

"He hadn't meant to show his dreams like that. His mother would treat their exposure much like the exposure of undergarments." And this is the problem with the Malfoys.

'She hesitated, then added, as if it had suddenly occurred to her that she might need to, "I could never despise you, no matter what happened."' The fact that she thought she even needed to note this is a serious sign of issues with their relationship.

Ah, Blaise. I do adore him. xD!

Uh oh. Draco's fascinated again.

The fact that I never knew about this alternate fic pains me dearly. I've now read CotG twice and am only now about to get to this fic.

Aw. I'm going to have to start calling Harry Bright Eyes.

I love that he only sometimes has pierced ears.

"You wouldn't have," Miranda said. "I changed it when my family displeased me. I am the first of the Goldreyers, and I mean to be the last if I can't breed a line that's worthy to succeed me." Now there's an idea!

He just linked his own name with Metamorphosis.

This is an interesting turn of events from CotG. And harry isn't nearly so lost among his personas as he would become six years later.

I really like this version of the story. It's very romantic and sexy. The original is a lot of fun and thought provoking but frustrating and a little scary as Harry seems so mentally unstable. He seems more in control of himself in this version.

I love this universe! I hope in the future you write more of it :)

Awww...so sweet.

I loved getting to see them before the events that shaped them into who they were in Changing of the Guard. Harry hasn't fallen into his Metamorphosis lives like he had there, and Draco's only starting out, before he gains the power and recognition he had when he met Harry/Brian.

This was a really neat perspective. Thanks for the fic!

-tati1

Love it! I liked the original better but this was cool too!

this story is beautifully and poetically written. i love reading EVERY word, watching as the relationships emerged and hoe the events were described. you paid great attention to detail which was slightly overwhelming at certain times but it allowed me to connect to the characters and their situations. thank you for writing something so beautiful.

That was adorable! Those two are just too cute! I loved that story! The way you write just draws me right into the story. I have to keep reading. I want to know more. I am always sad when the stories end. But they always have the perfect ending. Like this one. It was amazing. Awesome job! You keep writing them, and I will keep reading them!

Until then,

malfoyharry

Interesting. Malfoy doesn't want a persona but Harry only knows how to view the world through their eyes. Which isn't healthy by the way. I wonder what Malfoy will say to the letter. I wonder who Harry will go as. Himself maybe? Can't wait to find out!

Until then,

malfoyharry