Great Story

I agree with the mutants. I know what it's like to be discriminated. And afraid to go to school, too. Picture this. Six years ago, on an elementary school playground, a beautiful, crisp fall day. Basketballs bouncing, jump ropes smacking the pavement, everyone having fun. A shy,little redheaded girl nervously approaches a group of kids, asking to play with them. They tell her they don't want to play ball, but then, go over to play basketball with other kids. Everyday, that little girl tries to find a group to join, never succeeding. Other kids leave her alone. They leave her wondering what she did wrong. She has Asperger Syndrome. Nobody wants to play with a kid like her.

what chapter is ororo going to have to baby

Ororo was a pick pocket in Cairo which is not in Africa.

THAT WAS ONE CHAPTER :O

YEEEAAAHH, Mystique is nothing but sugar and sweets while Erik is nothing but dirt and evil... WHAT THE HECK!? Honestly, I love this fic, but you have to keep one thing in mind; Erik, deep down is a stupid hormonal brat, with power issues, LOTS of power issues, but still even and especially in the movies, if you look deeply enough you see the Auchwitz victim, the sweet kid, the father who loves his kids and Charles' best friend. Yet in this fic, he seems more evil than Hannibal Lecter, that's the vibe he's giving off while Mystique seems perfect.
This fic is awesome make no mistake, it is the single greatest X-Movie fanfic of all times if you ask me, but maybe you should start showing the grey side of the two 'villains'; Mystique is by far more evil than Erik in some ways, as she doesn't have a maternal bone in her body at least not towards others, she is so likely to kill kids for almost looking at her funny, its almost scary. Ororo being pregnant is a weapon and a vulnerability for her war against Erik and the X-Men, while Erik ironically, has shown himself to have little capacity for love towards adults in any form (especially teens), but he has a strong maternal/paternal instinct towards children (and damaged goods/people), its' why in a lot of ways he's a better parent than Charles, due to his understanding of the darkness in people, while Charles who had always led a rather comfortable and extremely wealthy life, has great difficulty understanding the animalistic/gruffer side of humanity.

Either way, hope you update soon, this fic rocks and you have a lot of awesome ideas going on, my rant was to offer you insight into Mystique and Magneto, who are both flawed yet deep down good and damaged people and how I would love to see you continue to include them, while also including their softer sides, because lets' face it, eventually Erik does stop his war and after Charles death no matter what, he is going to stop, especially since its his fault and deep down, he loved Charles as House loves Wilsin, Holmes Watson, they are brothers and trust me losing a brother changes a man as does finding his children after a long-separation. Love your perfect portrayal, of Logan, Ororo and the rest of the Mansion staff/X-Men though, could not agree more with it you're interpretation of them, is so flawless its' breathtaking keep it up. So PLEEEEEZZZZEEEEE update soon! This story has a lot of potential and your style is a rather refreshing and extremely great one so yes, I am begging you to return to this masterpiece, this 'X-4' fic

Omg ive missing this story. Amazing work! i cant wait until an update comes! i love the whole thing from start to finish!

Also i love the Stephen King quote on your page! :)

Your work is amazing! I love this entire plot of how Storm and Wolverine get together and their baby, hoping for a girl, will be so amazing! Can't wait for more ROMY ACTION! And Mystique has always been my fav character! There has been so much unsaid history in the moies and animes...except the 90s Xmen, but I can't wait for more interactions with her kids. also, are you gonna include the time traveler as well? Or are you gonna put in the Sentinels? I love your story either way, but I just love the references you produce in here. Peace!

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Please update!

OMG! i cant wait till the next chap! ur sooog ood at this! hope to see more soon!

Hey great story so far and great chapter on this last one also To Kill A Mockingbird is my mom's favorite book so thanks for putting that in there and please update soon PLEASE! I know your really busy and all but do update soon please. Congrads on you being in your last year of school I take it you aren't planning on college or where you live this is college for you? Also will you please send me a pm as to what stories you like so much besides Wolverine and The X-Men.

Spent a whole evening reading this, and I'm enjoying it. I like how you're pacing the story and not rushing this too much.

Keep going :)

First off, CONGRATS ON YOUR LAST YEAR OF SCHOOL! I remember both my senior year of high school and undergrad; the joy of almost being finished, the crazy antics of your friends, the planned senior pranks... Good times...

Ahm, on to the story. This had a pretty action packed beginning huh? That was some serious action to kick us off! And I love how the fighting outside the door started to bring memories of Ororo's childhood to the forefront of her mind. Really good tie-in. And the interaction and passion between Ororo and Logan this chapter was BANANAS! I swear, the screen almost melted every time they got together! Now that's RoLo done right! But then, Logan is the epitome of walking sex so... And I died when I read this exchange of dialogue between Rogue and Remy right here:

"Well she's alive and kicken now." Rogue told her, leaving the room, "don't do anything Ah would do."

"LIKE TO KNOW WHAT THAT IS." A voice yelled down the hall.

"Excuse meh." Rogue told them, holding up her finger to the happy couple before she stuck her head out the door. "SHUT UP YOU SWAMP RAT!" Rogue yelled back.

"MAKE ME!"

The Rogue/Remy banter is hilarious! More please! I'm really feeling bad for Mystique, and I like that you use Ororo's thoughts on her as a sounding board for what is really affecting Mystique and what she may be feeling and thinking. I just hope that Ororo can use her empathy and sympathy for Raven as an outlet to help Raven get over her issues, and Rogue and Kurt to understand why she did what she did to, or rather for, them. I'm also very excited to read what you do with Betsy. I'm liking the exchange that she's having with Emma. To me, they're kind of like two sides of the same coin at times. They are very different when it comes to some things, but very similar when it comes to others. And somehow they seem to compliment each other very well. So I like a hot/cold relationship between them that's ultimately rooted in a deep friendship based on trust. Oh, and I think your gonna be happy to know that your wish for a sequel to TTWW is coming true! Yes, I have all the inside details (being a beta for such an amazing author ;D is awesome!), but that's the only tasty morsel you're gonna out of me right now. I have save the rest in my back pocket for later. Ok, fine, you twisted my arm so I'll give you one more tasty crumb to whet your appetite. I think you're gonna be really surprised at the twists and turns that this story takes. (And there's so many major things that could happen, so you never know what it could be...) But that's all you get for now. You're gonna have to continue to wait on the edge of your seat with baited breath for i'm a quitter to release the sequel to find out what it is. I'm bad, I know ;D

Kisses Doll xoxoxo

Jesus Loves You and So Do I!

Halle ;D

P.S. Hope you had a wonderful Easter, and hopefully you have/had (depending on the status of your trip) an awesome trip here to the States!

HI,

I am really enjoying the characterizations, please write more soon!

i would like to know the answers to the questions too, lol

update soon