| Reviews for Internal Conflict |
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ApocalypticalKitten chapter 1 . 7/3/2014 This was really good, I enjoyed it very much. I don't think they were too OOC, and for someone who isn't religious you did well in that aspect. I totally agree with you about how it's kind of annoying that Hetalia is never serious. Anyway, keep writing! |
taitoluv chapter 1 . 5/24/2013 Great story, but your comment at the end made me crack up real bad. Bravo. |
Vlurry19 chapter 1 . 3/16/2011 "Damn it Lovino why do you have to be such a cockblock". damn right! heh. good story! loved it! |
RomaVena-One.Italy chapter 1 . 3/1/2011 lol i loved this XD thankie for writing it |
DJLemmiex chapter 1 . 9/17/2010 lol story is brillaint i want Potatoe Baster 2# to have my children :D btw i loved the name for Prussia, that really got me in fits of laughter, so funny w |
OmangoOlemonadeO chapter 1 . 9/12/2010 Is one of the best Spamano I've ever read...:) The difficulties between them were so well portrayed, and Prussia's appearance was a bonus. The make-up scence at Italy's house brought me to tears! I wouldn't have noticed that you weren't religious yourself, because all the prayers are so well planned and precisely written! Some minor grammar you might like to check over. But all-in-all, this is soooo good! It made my day! Thank you for posting this! LOL this is the longest review I've ever posted! You're a great writer! :D ~OmangoOlemonadeO |
shadowontherun chapter 1 . 7/26/2010 lmao potatoe bastard #2 XD great story |
crosstheindigo chapter 1 . 2/27/2010 *sque* I LUVED it! It was a really great story! They don't really seem OOC to me...It think they're fine. But, i thought the plot of this story was really good! Ecspecially when Prussia convinced Romano to go bak to Spain... Even Romano's prayer in the end! :) |
Sweet-With-Talent chapter 1 . 2/15/2010 This was so beautiful, I absolutely had a FANGASM over this part: “Italy cannot love Spain.” A look of devastation appeared on Spain's face when he said this out loud. “Lovino Vargas, on the other hand, cannot live without Antonio Fernandez Carriedo.” This was so awe inspiringly wonderful and in-character that I said to myself: "This is how Lovino should confess to Spain! It's perfect!". Thank you so much for such a wonderful read! |
Yolen Yui chapter 1 . 2/14/2010 Cute, a little sad, and I get what you mean about Lovino. It's kinda interesting, no one really gets in to the whole 'religous' aspect of the yaoi country pairings... I mean if they're meant to represent ttheir people.. |