Good story! It was full a drama and emotion. Everybody was in character. Excellent job.

Very enjoyable story. I Loved this very much
You kept everyone in character and that's what made this so AWESOME.
You could practically hear the character's voice while reading.

Keep Up The EXCELLANT Work!
(I just wish it wasn't so short...oh well, that's why they call it a one-shot.)

Oh... Leomon, Impmon, and Jeri... I always adored the trio's relationship and this explained it all perfectly. Especially the ending...

It may have been a little hard to read at times due to the style of writing it, but I can honestly say that, despite this, I still enjoyed it. :)

I loved this story, and I must say that you did a good job writing this, everyone was in character.

Nice work. The style is a little different than usual, but I like stories with Impmon. Good luck on other stories.