I really liked the idea and execution of this story!

This was hard to read in parts, because it was pretty dark. But I really think you nailed Rogue, and the pacing was excellent.

Cool story. I like the way your portarayed Rogue in this story shes alot more gritty like they way she is in the comic not the shy quiet girl they turned her into in the movies! Anyway great fic speciaoly adding some of the comic veterans (hank is my fav mutant ever!)
See ya!