It's interesting. I hope you continue it. Good luck with writing!

is this really going to be the only chapter? I thinks it's really good and should keep going! i hope you update it soon!

The style, Grammar, etc was definitely better than before.

However, I find it a bit strange that this takes place in high school. But I wont judge until I read a few more chapters.

So, please update soon XD

"Dame-Tsuna, don't go in. They're in their happy place right now. Don't worry, not in a perverted way."

Haha, that is the best bit out of all of it XDD (REBORN PWNS!)

Are you gonna write a sequal?

I like how Satsuki is jealous of the fangirls at the end too xD

I really enjoyed reading this chappie. I think it's a great way to end a fanfic. I loved reading this fanfic- it was so funny at times and yet sad at other times. I thin it's great for your first fanfic. Can't wait to read your other ones.

ur story's really good! i'm kinda sad that there's onli gonna b 1 more chappie left... anyway i look forward to reading ur stories agn :D

aww its finally ending.. cant wait to read the epilogue though! nice story :3

is it end or are they more please update soon of yes

yamaoto's angry either he love her or think her as a friend please update soon

THIS WAS ANOTHER AWESOME CHAPTER. WOT.

update soon :)

what is she planning please update soon i am very curious

OMG! I really want to know what happens next! It was getting good! TTATT Whoever said patience is a virtue LIED to us all... Great Chapter!

I realy like your OCs and am sad that this FF will be ending soon :(! I liked the Yamamoto x satsuki kinds wished it woulde developed more :Pcant wait to see what you have in store as an ending :D hopefully a happy one?

Good chapter, as little confusing though, but I enjoyed it- very creative btw! :)

tis an intense chappie :o

i hope you update soon :D