Hmm...

Aww, he really likes her! In my HeartGold game, I named him Jack, but in my head, I called him Jackass. But then he was almost nice, and it was wierd, but I liked it. So I knocked off the ass and now he's just Jack, the mostly-nice-but-still-kind-of-a-jerk dude. With the wierd hair.

You're so good.

Fav part was when the Elite Four was mentioned. That single sentence just got me.

Dangit, I loved this one as well :D You really have a knack for writing this pairing. You portray both Silver and Kotone so wonderfully... 3

My favourite moment, I think, was when Silver stroked his meganium. Very nice and touching.

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Then, you swallowed a gulp of air and stored the sappiness away for a winter that would never come, because you're still you regardless of however you've decided to change, and you were never a weakling or a crybaby. And hate, you've learned the hard, demeaning way, is no more useless than salty tears.
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Really amazing, that. Everything was really well written, but I think that were my favourite lines.

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You don't know why you notice such details. But, anyway –
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This I just have to quote for the lol. And the truth :D

Man, you're really beginning to turn me into a Soulsilvershipper. I can't help it - your take on it is just irresistible :D

~Snoaz

x3

AHaha - this is so cute!

I love the way you write.

Mm, I like it!

It was very well written... it was only one chapter, and yet from your descriptions I feel like I just read a whole book!

I really like this pairing, great story! 3

Brilliant. I loved how Silver picks at her flaws, waiting for her to appear, and how.. happy? he is to see she finally arrived to take on the Elite Four.

Wonderfully written and great view into the character's thoughts.

I really wish there were more to the story to delve into the innocent yet denying romance that has blossomed here.

I'm always a fan of this pairing, and I wish they were more well written stories such as this one out there.

Keep writing!

I'd love another story about the two.

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Incredibly well written and very in-character, if a bit sad.

Still a very nice story! :)

Man, I'm comteplating on these two together as well. xD Hehe. A nice little Silver introspective. It really does reflect his character - as of GSC. Can't wait for HGSS either! :)

Sora