I think the story is absolutely amazing.

I like how Jacob has accepted bellas pergnantcy I hope Edward comes back to be with bella

Before I started reading this, I skipped ahead to make sure that it was a B/E story. Anything else is quite simply disgusting. I have to say this:

The very idea that she would "choose" Jacob to be the "father" of her child is disturbing beyond belief. He's 15 years old, he is a complete child, he is not a man. In the books, he never grew up. He became even more immature after he went through the change. His body may have developed, but his mind never did.

Also, what the hell is this with Bella "choosing" someone to be the father? That's not even a choice that you make. You choose friends, and those friends will either be there alongside you to help or they won't.

GREAT

OMG GOOD CHAPTER OMGOMGOMGOMG

ok now I understand the coffee thing. March 8th hum-mm my brothers birthday! don't think that was the reason you where thinking about

so I am confused. Edward drinking coffee? I liked this chapter.

WOW that was unexpected great work-O

Sorry about that I hit the post button and I really do like ch tell me if u have anymore your an great author :-))

I really did like c

I really like your story let know if u have anymore stories of Edward and Bella

The whole thing was fantastic thank you 4 sharing

You ask me to tell you what i think, so here goes.

You used to much of the original book. Exact copies of surtan part. That bothered me.

I don't know if you have children. But to leave them for a month (bella&edw) or even two weeks (jacob&leah) that just doesn't work. Mine are 5 & 2 years old and i can't stand to leave them for more than two days.
And bella breastfeading after beeing away for a month us impossible. So that's another thing that bothered me.

I skiped the weddingstuff twice, i mean come on, we all know them. To read them out twice and repetetive. And i lost count on how many times they feed the children and putt them to bed. To much of the same.

The bottom line of your story us twilight without anything bad happening, nobody gets mad. Happy happy joy joy. It's not very realistic.

The thought behind it al was nice. I was just hoping for something more.

I hope i did not make you feel bad. Look at it this way. I finished it (does not happen with every story) and i took the time to review.

Ps excuse my English. In dutch and typing on my smartphone.

I really enjoyed your story! Maybe a sequel?

That story was very touching an well written I loved it