Looks like they managed to turn Tick Tock the Croc into a Heartless. Bit early for Sora to be dealing with Stop Magic but this is a more extreme world state, I wonder if that Messenger was the remains of Peter Pan? I can see Hook converting his most hated enemy into a manservant.

Well, well, you know most of my thoughts regarding this chapter. I should really stop making assumptions about things, but I can't help myself. This was a really great chapter. I was so worried for both Axel and Sora. Now I'm worried for Axel mostly.

We need more smiles from Leon, but at least, Aerith wasn't dreaming that one. TWT

Dawww, Zack focusing on his potential feast while Aerith is worried sick about him. It's really nice to get a greater idea of what's happening in the guy's head. I also appreciated to get more of Aerith's POV in this chapter. The poor girl has to support so many people in so many ways.

And Cloud left, of course. I laughed when Axel judged his clothes.

Angeal and Zack. TWT I'm getting crisis core's feels here. It sounds as though Angeal was close to a surrogate father to Zack in this. I'm really wondering what Zack will do in next chapter. And also how Donald and Goofy will react when they see Sora fighting against Axel.

I sense a misunderstanding coming. Unless it's not a misunderstanding? OoO''

Holy cow, I'm even more worried than before. I'm feeling so bad for everyone. And Leon yelled at Aerith too. I have an inkling as to whom these dark clothes belonged to. This chapter was so heavily packed with action and stuff, I don't even know what to react to. XD So let's see...

Cid's breakdown was sad and also endearing. I like to see him as the foster father of the whole resistance. And that sentence of "you're only 46!" really made me laugh admist the darker ambiance. I get that Leon was pissed to find his friends laughing when the end of the world appears nigh.

I really like Zack in this. He's such a perfect puppy and still manage to get dead serious. The ordeal with Axel is having me wondering hwo things will turn out for him in the long run. Will he be able to stay with the team? This plan could backfire in so many ways. Also, Sora must be quite overwhelmed.

Awesome work like always!

I love how Pongo and Perdita are characters in their own rights. :) Also, the confrontation between Axel and Zack was really nice. Seeing Zack's real strenght hidden under all his generous inclination was great. Poor Cid swinging around dynamites. What's the radius of those things? Wouldn't it hurt more than one single person?

My fangirl heart felt for Aerith when she worried about Leon. I will keep enjoying every little bits like this one.

Poor Sora has finally a clearer picture of what the worlds expect from him. It's a daunting responsibility for a 14 years old kid. Glad Anita and the puppies helped raising his spirit. Now I'm quite curious about the way everyone will deal with the Noventa Cannon.

Cid calling Roger kiddo managed to make me laugh despite the life and death situation. Having two Cids arguing together is brilliant too.

I felt so defeated when Axel decided to lie. I appreciate the extract of his journal afterwards. I could understand his reasons before reading it, but it seems to make it easier to accept that he's definitely in for trouble with his lie. And I'm so glad that Donald is suspicious of him. Zack is far too trusting. It's one thing to ogg the glory of the heartless kill since he wants to keep Sora hidden, but to ask for a ship? Now I'm wondering who is going to fly up to take out the Noventa Cannon.

Leon fighting with Sora shocked me a little at first. It's totally in character though. And all his despair at the start. Loved it. This fic is freaking good so far. :D

The stakes are so high already! I loved the scene with Captain Hook and Smee. The comedy is so good. Axel leaving Sora almost right after finding him... I understand that he's hard-pressed to get things settled and he's quite in-character too. I just hope he won't lose Sora's friendship because of it. Meanwhile, Sora is looking for his friends. Were Wakka, Tidus and Selphie on the island with them? It sounds as though there was two separate trio of friends on that island.

I like the report on their current knowledge over Maleficient's work and her army. It really help settle in the uncoming threat. I just hope things turn out alright for Traverse Town with that Noventa Cannon. I'm thinking of gundams for some reasons... On to the next chapter to see how things turn out.

That fight was quite well written. I liked the part in the beginning too, so much mysteries. Sora is quite incredible to manage all that when he still doesn't know what's going on. I wonder if Axel will stay in the party with Sora, Donald and Goofy for the most part of this. Certainly hope so.

Also, that list of heartless Axel fought against in the past was glorious. It's a delightful read, no doubts about it.

I was expecting conflicting feelings from Axel, since Roxas can't appear unless Sora gets turned into a heartless. It was really well done too. Such luck that Jiminy is always there, saving the important information in case Donald and Goofy forget pieces of it. You'd think that message was still quite straightforward. And what are those special potion the nephews aimed to sell their uncle?

You're making each chapter ends on such a high note, now I have to see if Axel can take out that gigantic heartless. I laughed so much at the : don't blame the messenger. And that metal crate falling from the sky.

Poor Roger has to work on the computer instead of creating music. Makes sense that he'd work on the gizmo shop. And that moogle's pom-pom is still in danger! D: Go save him Zack! Or someone bring that pup back home. XD

What sort of ending is that for a chapter? Now I can't stop reading. XD

Really nice to see the head of the Resistance. And at least 3 different Cid, all helping with the Resistance. Yay! I wonder if Axel will ever grow concerned about other people than Sora and Roxas in the future... I like how the situation is set so far and I can't wait to understand how Sora came to rest behind those crates. Cause he have to be resting? Unless he lost his heart somewhere? Shouldn't be making theories, but I have an active imagination. Anyway, I have to catch up some more.

I like everything I've read so far.

Those dialogs are so gold! XD And all this gummi ship action. I liked it. Wonder what happened to destiny islands and its occupant. Where could Wakka be?

So nice to see Zack! :D Also, I hadn't expected Yuna as the local healer, but I had a few laughs from the defense driving. I really appreciated the part in the beginning where you explain that Axel genuinely feels emotion now instead of faking or pretending. So endearing!

I can't help but feel that those guys are overly trusting. Zack I understand, and I guess Yuna too, but Axel is a stranger popping out of no where. Then again, with the knowledge of various worlds existing around... I guess it may not come as such a surprise to meet weird stranger. Must be a regular occurence if anything.

Wow, such a good setting. And it flowed so well too. Nothing superfluous here, only the explanations we needed. I'm really curious to see Axel adapting to this alternate universe. And which changes will be in it. Let's see how long it takes me to catch up with this fic now... ;)

Well, I sure wasn't expecting any of this. You totally turned this derpy, chill character into sort of a derpy, chill jerk xD

Funny the way he goes about interrogating the team and sorta flops while he does it, which is true to form *smh*. Nice touch with the cue cards; I almost forgot about those. Really confused about the voice at the end, but I guess we'll figure that out later.

Wow, Zack really needs a beating. He wasn't totally nice before, but now... Sad how a guy like him could become this way - I wonder what his agenda really is? Maybe I knew and forgot, but... .-.

Anyway, I really enjoyed China these last few chapters (forgot about how Axel ended up for now. Very cool ). Everything about that world was just one problem after another, so by the time the Emperor was on his last legs, Sora's response was completely warranted. Great stuff!

Good luck on your next chapter - hope to see it soon!

I want to try and express how much I love this story, but I don’t feel like I can do it justice. Your writing is really good. Some stories I’ve read can keep only keep a handful of characters in-character, but you go all out. You’ve got everyone in-character and that’s no small feat. I really love how you portrayed Demyx. Wasn’t expecting it and I’m in awe of it. Can’t wait to see what you have in store for the other Org members! As always, looking forward to the next update! :D