hmm.. Have I posted a sorting song/Limerick for you yet?

If not.. *cracks knuckles* Here we go!

1)Each year I sing a song/ that one hopes never goes wrong/ To each of the houses I will sort / To avoid Moldy Short/ Egad.. My poem is taking too long. *bows*

2) Griffindore, Hufflepuff, Ravenclaw, Slytherin. To each of these houses I will sort you in. Whether you are brave, or loyal, Smart, or cunning..

Hogwarts, as one, Gets the Dark forces running!

3) I was born in days of old when the four were so bold to create a school in which you dwell.. For one student.. It has been.. Well..

The time has come for all to be united with the world community. You may not hide any longer. For one side is growing weaker while the other stronger.

*bows* I have written what has come to mind. Anything else may have been.. iffy.

YOU PASS! _

A song eh? hmm

Not an easy task..

Secrets kept from long ago may help you travel to and fro

Seek Earth wind and fire to find what you desire

A lost one may help find the way to a place hidden...Shway dudes.

Lost then found a time regained. A loved ones life may remain

(heavens, Krypto, I'm just making this up as I go. There isn't any rhyme nor reason to it. :P)

Lunar Moth Spread your wings.. Help the chosen find some things.

(Meh. *shrugs* Make of it as you will. By the way.. In my opinion Luna may got to either Ravenclaw or Slythrin.. But one of the other two may not be so bad either. emphasis on _may not be_.)

Excellent story so far.

I am very sorry that I cannot think of anything good that would make a Sorting Hat's song. I am also useless at writing anything towards any type of story.

I look forward to your next installment.

I can't help about the shape I'm in,

I can't sing, I ain't pretty and my legs are thin.

Godric took me and he gave me brains,

Made me bold enough to sort you lot,

and reserve the bravest for himself,

If only you put me on your head.

But then he said don't ask me what I think of you,

I might not give the answer that you want me to.

Oh well.

Helga favors the loyal who will never give up.

Rowena wants the witty with their reparte.

Now, when I talked to God and I knew he'd understand.

He said stick by me and I'll be your guiding hand.

But don't ask me what I think of you,

I might not give the answer that you want me to.

Oh well.

Salazar gets those with desire burning within,

to rise above others and be truly great.

But don't ask me what I think of you,

I might not give the answer that you want me to.

Oh well.

With apologies to Fleetwood Mac for the butchering of "Oh Well", my favorite song of all time.

You didn't get very far before you stopped. Here's my contribution to try to inspire you to take up your mighty quill once more and flail away at the forces of ignorance and confusion that threaten us all for lack of good Harry/Luna stories.

It is an original and good idea, however, not done all too well. The story is very disjointed, because you have not used varied sentence types.

You pull ideas out of thin air without any background to them, and due to this, the story has no depth. Your claims as to there being a wand with basilisk fang is, if I may say so, unbelievable and not doable, as breeding basilisks is against Wizarding Laws, and only Parselmouths would have a slight chance at beating them. But most Parselmouths were Dark Wizards who bred basilisks themselves.

Also, I highly doubt that threstral hair is used, as they are seen to be cursed. Using cursed objects as a wand core would be counter-productive.

Your writing style is quite repetitive, and doesn't grip the reader's attention. Instead of hinting at the appearances of things, you create a big long list that is hard to plough through.

If you tried to work on your descriptors and writing style, this story could really turn into something. But, at the moment, it needs a lot of work.

Please update.

love the story, am looking forward to maore chapters. am really hoping that youll update soon and havent dropped the story, because this story will most likely prove to be very interesting.

I am here to sort you yes quite. To find the house that fits just right.. The Slytherins prize cunning and greed. As such act like the end of a steed. The Hufflepuffs nice and often kind. They often are a jokes behind. The Gryphendores true and brave, usually act as a foolish knave. The Ravenclaws so full of wit will throw a mighty fit. So listen children young and old. Who's brains are full of mold. That yes the houses have virtues as high as quidditch balls. They also have many dismal flaws.

The best I can come up with. I truly like this story and hope to see it finished and not left abanndoned as many are.

A Fan

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Awesome! Luna is one of the greatest Harry Potter characters ever! The only ones that are even close to comparing with her are Snape, Fred, and George.

This story is a great idea! Luna is my favorite Harry Potter character and I look forward to seeing what you do with this. This story is going on my alerts!

Cool! You probably don't have to put in all of those notes (Like the one saying you got the poem above Gringott's from SS). It was awesome.

Awesomeness!