it was so good please update

Melissa, I could spend all 10,000 characters to describe the entire time that I spent reading this story, but I won't. I'll just be honest and tell you that it was a FANTASTIC read! I really was enjoying it and then it ended. But an awesome ending, no doubt! I am gonna read the second part, asap. Keep these stories up, yeah? :)

I absolutely loved this !

Oh my gosh it was just ALL

so amazing, i couldn't stop reading it

you are amazingly talented when it comes to stories

:D

very very nice, it was quite(insert Miz) AAAWWWWWESOOOOME lol I like your main pairings of Eve/Ted Kofi/Kelly I am so starting on the sequel now. Keep up the great work lot's of love hugs and praise

Really good story!

Awww!

:) I'm so happy I love the ending

Kelly and Kofi

Ted and Eve

This is perfect

I'm sad this is my last review, but there's a sequel, so I guess that just ended my sad party

This story was wonderful... Your Wonderful :P

Can't wait to read the sequel!

~Dana

Awwwww I love the ending it was so perfect I'm so sad that this is over but I'm happy tht there is a sequal

omg i friggin loved this! i can't wait to read the next bit. the sequal that is lol. this was so damn cute i cant get over how much i liked this story!

This was a fantastic story!

Wow loved the ending! A little sad that the stories over already but you did a really good job with it :)

I have to say, this was a fantastic story. i became a big fan. Read it all the way through and loved every chapter. Here's hoping the sequel is just as fabulous. Great work!

Aww, great ending; really cute!

Definately going to check out the sequal.

Awee! The Eve/Ted & Kelly/Kofi love in this was adorable!

I love this story, it's probably one of my favorites on the site. And the four of them got their happy ending...for now. I'm now off to read the sequel!

xx Marlowe

Amazing what a hell of a ending...But wait theres more!

Loved it! Super sweet! Yay for the two couples!