That was amazing.
Both of them understand each other so well. It was all about listening and understanding and they both did it for each other.
Kai had chosen the hard way but in the end it helped Hilary to know & explore herself. He he himself got the time to achieve what he wanted.
Hilary on the other hand proved that it wasn't only him but she was too invested in the relation they had and she still wants to make him a part of her life.
Now both of them trust each other.
When I started the chapter I was actually surprised to see no quote but good things comes at the end.
About the story I'll say it was interesting, full of suspense and drama. It had the genuine touch of reality. The emotions, situations and peoples are all from the world we live in, nothing like a fantasy of someone and that's why the story is so attractive because people can relate.
You two girls did a spectacular job. The idea of the story, the imagination and the writing was great.
Nice work.
Kitty
Ps: Sorry it took me so long to complete it.

Woho! So things did work out. I'm glad Hilary is happy with her new self and new life.
Her friend seems intresting to me. She has let Hils open up which is great.
Tala and Hilary aren't on the best terms but are great friends.
Well I wanted to see more of Tala and Julia.
Nice work.
Kitty

Sorry I accidentally posted half of the review.
I was waiting for this from the first chapter. So that's what happened that night. Hilary was hiding all this from 2 years.
Brooklyn is a real maniac. He was so obsessed with Ming that he didn't let her go and the his possessiveness killed her. Poor Hiro! That guy was trying to help. Btw what happened with Tyson?
I wish Kai is telling the truth now.
Scarlet Witch of Terra

God! I waas waiting

Wohoho! Kai you hurt the most dangerous girl.
Their plan was intellectual and it was working. They were so close to succeed but wrong path will lead you the disaster. Karma.
Who will Hilary talk to? What will happen next?
The suspense is too much to bear. I can't say much I'm heading straight to the next chapter.

Oh my God! Don't know why but suddenly I'm feeling hurt, the way realisation hit Hilary it is vey painful.
There are many secrets hidden inside Kai's heart and they will be going to make big issues.
It's nice to know Kai and Tala are back on the track. Their childhood memories seems sweet enough.
Nice work.
Kitty

Oh girl! Hilary is finally being herself. The cheerful and optimist girl. Good for her.
At last Julia found a solution with the help of Hils.
Kai and Hilary are getting quit along. Kai is a bit OOC but don't know why I'm really loving it.
Nice work.
Kitty

Awww sweetness is dripping from the last KaiHil moment. How easily Kai had made Hilary's life a bit peaceful.
Hilary and her mother need to talk and sort out themselves. It not good for a mother-daughter relation.
Nice work.
Kitty

Tala beat Brooklyn! His eyes got natural sunglasses. LMAO.
The way Hilary is scared at her own house is so sorrowful to watch but Kai taking care of her is quit sweet. She is finally opening up with someone.
Nice work.
Kitty

Sorry i read this story in one go but i can't control myself. This story is amazing it is a whole package of every thing I can't express my gratitude to you are a great author who has finished her story after so many years. I am really thankful to you.

Wow that was amazing. Kai surely did a great job beating Brooklyn.
They bunk together and a professor running after them was really funny.
So finally Kai told his name. I was like how long will it take Hilary to ask the most obvious question? Just in three days they becoming a friend of Kai Hiwatari is a real achievement.
Nice work.
Kitty

She did what?
She helped Brooklyn of all the peoples out of a murder. This is thrilling.
The way Kai is showing interest in Hilary really excites me.
Nice work
Kitty

I binge-read this story soon after my father passed away in winter of 2012, and to revisit it now after so many years is nice. It still holds up and it’s in my top five still. Please don’t stop writing. Your stuff is amazing.

Wow the commotion between Hilary and Tala was quit interesting. I like their friendship, if it is that, pretty much. But why Hilary is so scared to tell him the truth?
Nice work.
Kitty

I'm getting it a little. Ming Ming is murdered and one of the Granger is blamed but Hilary knows the truth and now Tala too.
So Kai is in the picture now. This is going to be very interesting.
Nice work.
Kitty